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Emily
02-02-2004, 10:22 AM
And also let it be said that a witty, articulate, classy stripper who is confident with herself and her body makes a lot more than the one with the perfect tits...in my experience.
Also something to consider.
LoveSexMoney
02-02-2004, 10:53 AM
not to bash xxxeyezxxx, but I agree with ARedhead 100%. I also don't think she was being harsh. She was being real. eyez, you totally overreacted to ARedhead's post. And let's not forget how eyez has described her own idea: stupid. and pathetic. oh ok, she threw fun in there too. Of course she has the right to do whatever she wants. Nobody is being harmed by it. But is it realistic? NOT.
Eyez, if you get a winning bidder please please let us know because I'll start my own "Please pay for my UC education including grad school" site. And I'm not being sarcastic either.
HolidayOnStage
02-02-2004, 11:22 AM
Yes..there are definately a lot of good points from people who are giving constructive criticism..like AREDHEAD
But this is not .....as NVJosh says
"She comes in here wanting attention and sympathy, throwing herself into the spotlight"
"However, has her atrocious spelling, lack of grammar and perceived lack of class inspire anyone to help her or has it turned more and more people against her?
"I am a regular in the chat and a day doesn't go by where I don't get IMs along the lines of "Is it just me, or is eyez really getting annoying?"
"And how long is it going to take for you to lose the weight to become a stripper in the first place?"
That just sucks.
Holiday
yeah i do agree she had some good points i was just in a really bad mode last night but josh all i have to say is go fuck your self that was so rude! and the girls in here are right for backing my ass up how dare u! you know NOTHING about me!NOTHING! and i really doubt people in the chat room are saying im anoying i hardly talk when im in there cause im doing umpteen other things on the comp. and as far as the spelling goes... dose it really matter? it can be read i have posted MANY times thati canot spell and prob. never will be able to like i said i spell how things sound in my head sound them out!and yeah josh you are not a dnacer or a prospective dancer so why are you on this bored? last time i a checked guys dont wear make up and g- strings enless theres drag. hum justa thought, WORDS OF NVJOSH " That being said, eyez' spelling in an abomination. She comes in here wanting attention and sympathy, throwing herself into the spotlight and then basically dismissing anyone who criticizes her"EXSCUSE ME? what am i wanting sympathy for? just cerouse. every thing is fine in my neck of the woods only thing i have goin is wanting to lose my belly. so where is this coming from?, and the attention um no i act prefur not to be the center of attetion i belive girls in here deserve more attention than i do to they are hot and smart and are act working at clubs right now.
"And if you hate where you live, MOVE. Find a better town! You'll beg for $8,000 for boobs? Wouldn't you be better served begging for $8,000 to move to a bigger city where there is work and opportunity that might last you a lifetime" I JUST MOVED FOR THE 7 TIME THIS YEAR! im here because my b/f lives here we have been togther for over a year now and im not ganna have a long distance relashionship this is were he works.
" Do you think your boyfriend will stick around through the whole thing (I'm not saying he won't, I just know first hand how stressful it can be to be the S.O. of a dancer)? Will you instantly do better than the dancers who come across more intelligent, witty and sophisticated">>> FYI i have been with ryan for over a year and have lived with him the whole year i moved in with him after a week of dateing and have been with him sents we love eachother VERY much and him or i are not going any were he suports me wanting to strip infact he incorages me because he know he will get somthing out of it to.( tattoo "sleeves", yes i told him i would pay for them and i dont have a prob with paying for them) and also like i said you donot know me how do you not know im not smart or witty? just cerouse.
and the thing about my living in BFE and asking were the jobs are COMUTE!! its a hour from here, but im not driving a hour from some 6.00 a hour job hell no i will be spending more in gas than i act bring home! ( i drive a 95 dodge ram 1500 a pig with gas)
so with that said maybe you should look at ytour self and ask why am i in here in not a stripper ( the site is STRIPPERweb.com not stripperJUNKIES!)
LoveSexMoney
02-02-2004, 03:13 PM
Wow! You two moved in together after a week of dating and he's getting tattoo sleeves after you start stripping!
You might have been ahead a minute ago but you're slippin'. Big time.
It's cool tho. You're young. Live and learn.
HolidayOnStage
02-02-2004, 03:22 PM
I think this thread has hit the skids. I think that its more of an... agree to disagree situation now. Many different view points. I think eyezz will get where shes going sometime. Yes, I agree live and learn
polecat
02-02-2004, 03:34 PM
Well, my final piece of advice on this topic- lose focus on the current ad (i.e. let it rot for now, who knows?), and make something more likely to succeed.
The original ad DOES seem a little bit too much like "cart before the horse" since it details much too much prior to implants, and also expresses a desire to lose weight.
Perhaps a "Fund my weight set and pedal bike" ad would have more success? You say you live out in the boonies- this makes for a great angle of putting the closest gym too far, so maybe a $1000 reserve for a full weight set, pedal bike and stair climber, with only an obligation to send your financeer a photo set of progress once a month after purchase?
It gets you closer to your goal, it's something more likely to draw support, and seems pretty much win-win to me.
Lilith
02-02-2004, 04:16 PM
[snip eye-glazing rant]...as far as the spelling goes... dose it really matter?
Someone without the basic ability to utilize proper grammar, spelling and even the occasional punctuation is not likely to be the most stellar conversationalist. Conversation makes money. In my club, there are far better looking girls than I, with bigger tits and who provide nudity. I still make damned good money. Why? Because I am smart.
If there are in fact absolutely NO jobs in your area, then where are the clubs and how does the local population earn the money to enable strippers to earn $1000 nightly? One word makes me doubt the veracity of your claim: Reaganomics.
All in one post you accuse him over going over the line by being rude and then insinuate that he is a transvestite for being interested in this site. Oh, the irony.
I find it mildly amusing how people question his "right" to be here because he is not a stripper. Eyes is not a stripper either. Oh, she MAY be a stripper... one day... after she loses 100 lbs... and gets a boob job... and a breast lift... and moves... Yadda yadda yadda. Josh, on the other hand, is married to a woman who is currently stripping yet he is told to go away because this site is "only for strippers". Funny thing is, Josh is in the exact position as Pryce (in other lines of work but seriously involved with a stripper). Eyez, you want to be the first to call Pryce a transvestite and demand he leave for not being a stripper?
like i said you donot know me how do you not know im not smart or witty? just cerouse.
Is that a rhetorical question? Assuming it isn't, I am sure you are a sweet, lovely girl who means well, but smart people know that "cerouse" isn't even close. www.dictionary.com
While I conceed that it is not outside the realm of possibility that you only seem to be an illiterate, spoiled young woman with a huge "victim" mentality, one somehow doubts that in real life you sparkle with stunning wit, philosophical charm and a broad vocabulary.
and the thing about my living in BFE and asking were the jobs are COMUTE!! its a hour from here, but im not driving a hour from some 6.00 a hour job hell no i will be spending more in gas than i act bring home! ( i drive a 95 dodge ram 1500 a pig with gas)
So sell it. Book value on that truck, coincidentally, is $7-8k. Plenty of money for an inexpensive car with great gas efficiency, a nutritionist to assist you with your diet and a sizeable down payment for breast augmentation. There might even be enough to buy Ryan his sleeve tattoos. Bonus, you could have the rest of the money necessary for the BA quite quickly making $1k per night at your local clubs.
http://www.nadaguides.com/Values/ValueCategoryReport.asp?UserID=52080CA52581C&DID=38019&wSec=1&wPg=1207&CategoryId=3&MakeId=1052&VehicleId=5134&Year=1995&ColorId=
so with that said maybe you should look at ytour self and ask why am i in here in not a stripper
I'm not going to say it. Note my restraint.
Eyez, as said before, I'm sure you are a lovely, sweet young woman. But you can dream in one hand and piss in the other and see which fills up the fastest. However much the thought offends you, a reality check was overdue. I also need to add that if your feathers get ruffled any time someone dares question you, then your skin is a little thin for your dream of being a stripper.
Moral of the story: Complaining about your circumstances won't get you as far as doing something realistic about it. Educate yourself; you'll make more money stripping by being the girl with a sparkling personality and a few extra pounds than by being the prettiest girl in the joint with the biggest, perkiest boobs.
did you reize you fucked with the quotes and made them what there not? it dont matter im not ganna be on here after tonight
Emily
02-02-2004, 04:38 PM
Eyez, this is for you (because I know you're not going to like the previous post by Lilith)...
This is a board for people who want to communicate with other strippers, for whatever reason. We all come to help each other, share ideas, etc., and for 99% of, it's all in a helpful way...and I consider Josh in that 99%, and if you've ever read his posts in the Dollar Den, you'd see why.
I just hope you take what we are saying as a group to heart, not just pick and choose the stuff you like and pit that against the stuff that hurts. In the end, we're all trying to help you.
The people on stripperweb know the business very well, so take all of what we say to heart, even if it doesn't really seem like what you want to hear.
:grouphug:
Emily
02-02-2004, 04:45 PM
did you reize you fucked with the quotes and made them what there not? it dont matter im not ganna be on here after tonight
Eyez, if that's all you got out of Lilith's post, you are really doing yourself a disservice.
She is absolutely right that you have to be able to roll with the punches in this business. If someone gets under your skin, you have to be able to blow it off. Running away because you are frustrated with what people are saying here shows you are probably not cut out for dancing. Not everyone is going to be 100% supportive (in fact, most aren't).
Dancing isn't just about the glamourous bodies and makeup. It's waaaaaay more about intereacting with people. that's something a lot of wannabe dancers never realize (I didn't) and it's also the hardest part.
Madcap
02-02-2004, 04:53 PM
And about the spelling correction: if you're gonna correct her spelling correct everybody's spelling on the thread or it looks like you're picking on her. If you could decifer it on your own, most of us probably could too and didn't need the translation. It just looks kinda mean whether you meant it to be or not when there are obvious mistakes in other responses in the same thread albeit, not as bad.
Hey, I had trouble reading it so i ran it through Microsoft word. In short, I had a hard time deciphering it on my own. I didn't mean to 'pick on her.' I miss keys all the time and screw up spelling, but I can at least read everyone elses posts without five passes. If I looked like an asshole, my apologies.
My opinion is still that eyez should take another look at aredhead's post, though.
SCGirl
02-02-2004, 05:20 PM
*sigh*
it makes me sad to see so many people arguing over something that's not worth fighting about. Eyez, please don't be offened by anyone. Everyone here is VERY open about their opinions because, for the most part, we all allow them to be so. Sometimes the criticism can feel and be overly harsh...been there myself (with my very first post even). But you gotta give people time...some things aner people a lot and they feel the need to speak out. Sometimes, because of the nature of the internet, we all speak more freely than we would face to face...this leads to people getting angry/hurt/etc.
Trust me, I KNOW EXACTLY how you feel honey!!! I too am not a dancer--I'm also much too large. I came here because I originally wanted to be. I don't have much money at all either and I know how alluring it is to hear of these girls having a "bad" night and getting $100 (which is more than I get paid in a week). And I certainly understand the lack of jobs (I'm in Bum Fuck Upstate NY). Just take the good advice you got and turn a blind eye to the rest of the post. Simply move past it--no one will hold a grudge against you for it. I've gotten a lot of great information by doing this (if I had run at the first sight of a bad coment, I would have lost out on a lot).
And on a final note...unfortunately, some people can make easy money, others can't. I tried to earn some money for college by setting up a website about my mom. She recently died, leaving my entire family terribly in debt. I put a paypal link and everything. I sent the link to everyone I knew and subscribed to many rings and even to the savekaryn website list thing. To date, I haven't even recieved $1. It disheartens you a bit, I know, but it's life.
Good luck to ya sweetie. If you need support, I'm still here.
PS...in case anyone's interested ;) ;).... http://www.geocities.com/BLUEHATBARBIE/ I'm so lame! lol
Lilith
02-02-2004, 05:28 PM
did you reize you fucked with the quotes and made them what there not? it dont matter im not ganna be on here after tonight
I accidentally hit "[" this key rather than this key, "]". One mistake in a very long post. In two sentences you made eleven mistakes. Furthermore, I am hard-pressed to view you as smart and witty, let alone mature, when your response is a resounding "I know you are but what am I?" and to stick your fingers firmly in your ears because I don't applaud your every move.
Not all helpful advice is applause. Not all applause is helpful. Remember that as you go through life.
Topaz
02-02-2004, 05:36 PM
how on God's green earth are y'all going to dog someone's spelling...when there's no spell check...or insult someone's intelligence...just because their spelling isn't great....please....if i were ms. eyez...i'd be hurt too (ok maybe not these days...i'd go off...but that's not the point here...)...and probably leave as well...no one is perfect...including the folks here with perfect spelling skills...
i mean...think about it...most corporate execs...have secretary's...get over yourselves...
:peace:
Pamela
02-02-2004, 09:14 PM
Let her do her thing already. Damn don't we all do what we want, ask for what we want, buy what we want? Leave the spelling alone, anyone with half a brain can figure it out. We are all different, thats the joy of people! She knows about school, she knows about spelling, all she really wants right now is a boob lift!!!
Good for her. Not one of us is any better than this person. Opinins are fine, but she is getting hammered here now. Why is it when a person already feels down, some others make it worse for them.
Let her live her life, and learn by her mistakes. I only hope we did not run her off, she came here being "real," and that makes her nice to know.
She is not our child, but an adult.
Hun good luck, Hit many sites for those boobs.
Pamela PS yea i messed up my spelling too. Big friggin deal
Too much drama, let me tell you.
Lillith, excellent post.
Eyes, I have given you advice, and didnt want it to end this way, but girl, stop nitpicking at everything!!!!
Its true what someone uptop mentioned... you only nitpick at what u dont like in the thread.
Listen, if you wanna be a dancer, you have to be tough... lots of NO's and even the hottest chicks get them. So if you're gonna be one of the girls that "rolls their eyes" at every male who says no then you wont be making any money. My point is, that if someone gives you advice, or a tough attitude, take it for what its worth.
Dont get nasty with people if they try to give you advice, even if the advice you DONT WANT TO HEAR.
I think most of the men on this board help out a lot... they arent strippers, but neither are you
Just my 2 cents
I must say first that I didn't even check out the site because I agree you should be trying to get an education rather then bigger tits. Your high school gpa doesn't matter at all when you enroll in junior college, and girl you should. Even if you live in BFE I bet there is still some fast food chain you could get off your ass and work at while you wait for your plans to go through. I've been working since I was 14 and there is no excuse. A job is a job wether it be $6 at McDonalds or $1000 dancing. I know now I sound bitchy but you sure as hell deserve it for acting the way you did to these lovely ladies and gents who were just trying to help you. As for your gut, jog, it does wonders. But your outlook on life, only God can help you now. Also, pushups will help some of the saggiest tits, I bet you could benefit from them. And seriousely, you make yourself sound like white trash, and I'm not talking about your grammer; this does not fly well in clubs. If you act like this in your club when you do start dancing, don't be surprised when the girls start making your life hell. For all you other ladies, take it from another 19 yr old, we're not all this immature. Please don't let this girl give you the impression that all of us young ones expect something for nothing. She is giving us a bad name.
And another thing, Lillith, right on!
Lilith
02-03-2004, 03:15 AM
Eh, I'm up for one more go.
Eyez, have you ever done any writing? Poetry, short stories, things like that? If you have, you are probably very familiar with the concept of turning over your work to a friend to read it. And what do you tell them? If you're like me, then you tell them, "Tell me what you REALLY think." You say this because you want your writing to be GOOD, know that the work may need some improvement and that it is easier to hear criticism before making an ass out of yourself among the general public. Metaphorically speaking, this is what the people here were doing.
I'll start with the spelling, typos, grammar and punctuation. You asked if it matters. Of course it matters; it's your only method of communicating with us. Unfortunately, your posts are so garbled that I'm sure many people just skip right by them rather than trying to decipher the gobbledegook. Since the school systems are atrociously lax in this sort of thing, here's a quick crash course.
1) Either write your posts out in Word, which automatically runs a spell check, or open another window and set it to www.dictionary.com You can save this link in your Favorites by clicking the button on the top of your Explorer task bar (top of the screen, right above the URL window) and clicking "Add". If you decide to write in Word, just highlight the post by left-clicking the mouse, go to "Edit" at the top of the screen and select "Copy". Then go to the reply screen here and, in the Edit function again, click "Paste". (For the record, I'm not treating you as if you are stupid. It took me months to learn this when I first started posting on message boards.).
2) Don't type in all caps. It's seen as shouting and is considered rude.
3) Punctuation. Put a period at the end of your sentences and then hit the space bar twice. Begin new sentence. It makes posts far easier to read.
Your posts don't have to be minor miracles worthy of an English doctorate, but it is helpful if we can understand them. People will also be a little more willing to listen to you. Typos, bad grammar, etc etc... this can be overlooked, as long as we can read your post. We can't communicate with you if we have no clue what you are saying or don't care enough to translate it.
First rule in a debate is: Do not throw stones you cannot dodge. On one point, you attacked by stating that only strippers deserve to post here (while you yourself are not a stripper). On another point, you claimed to be smart and witty (yet your posts are almost unrecognizable as being in English). You dug the hole, I only pushed you in. That isn't the way to win a debate. If I had been in your shoes, I would have demanded that NVJosh back up his claims with facts and quotes proving you to be attention-seeking, immature, etc etc. As hard as it is to be calm when people are debating YOU, you have to try to remove emotion from your reponses. A calm, dispassionate response helps defuse the situation. You can secretly hate them all you want to, as long as you try to avoid a public war on the forums.
Constructive criticism is your friend. Embrace it. Disagreeing with you, your methods or your ideas does not mean people do not like you; it means they didn't like the idea, method or your line of thought. Usually every disagreement also has some salient point. Don't cut off your nose to spite your face by instantly disregarding what someone says merely because they disagreed. You'll lose a lot of good advice and ideas that way. Few people on the internet are truly spiteful. Assume that most people mean well and you won't be far off the mark.
And finally, don't post tantrums threatening to leave. The cold reality is that you might get a few good-bye posts but no one will really care and you will be forgotten in short order. This isn't helped much by the fact that it is rare indeed that anyone post an "I'm leaving!" and actually does it. In the end, it only serves to make you look like a drama queen.
And that ends my quickie crash course in surviving on the internet. I still think you should sell the truck and buy a few good books, but I would be content with you becoming a quality member here.
**Edioted to fix code
seraya
02-03-2004, 08:25 AM
Let her do her thing already. Damn don't we all do what we want, ask for what we want, buy what we want? Leave the spelling alone, anyone with half a brain can figure it out. We are all different, thats the joy of people! She knows about school, she knows about spelling, all she really wants right now is a boob lift!!!
Good for her. Not one of us is any better than this person. Opinins are fine, but she is getting hammered here now. Why is it when a person already feels down, some others make it worse for them.
Let her live her life, and learn by her mistakes. I only hope we did not run her off, she came here being "real," and that makes her nice to know.
She is not our child, but an adult.
Hun good luck, Hit many sites for those boobs.
Pamela PS yea i messed up my spelling too. Big friggin deal
I so agree with you there pamela ( and few others )......
What is the big friggin deal? If eyez wants to advertise for a boob job on the internet and ppl are prepared to send her money ( lets not forget in the past it has actually worked ) well then good luck to her! You have ppl who apply for show's like extreme makeover's or stripper's who charm their atf's in to buying them boobs..... no one is owed anything but we all have our way of doing things. Everything in life is worth giving a try... if it doesn't work, well then eyez will just have to think of something else or get a job.... its her life so she is free to do what ever she chooses....she is not hurting or deceiving anyone and your not donating the money so don't worry about it!
While some of you are offering helpful criticism the rest of you are over stepping the mark imo..... And for as for the posts about her spelling geez was it really necessary? some of you were just being patronizing. If you really want to help then send her a PM don't embarrass her on a public board by giving her a lesson on grammar and spelling (have any of you even considered the fact that she might be dyslexic).
NOW EYEZ....
I agree that you should consider going back to college.... I dropped out of school at 15 but also went to college at 15... this isn't the norm here but i was adamant that i was going to finish my education and so they allowed me to go to college and finish off there..... so what i am trying to say is if you really want to go to college THERE IS ALWAYS A WAY.... But you have to stop making excuses.... you say that you can't go to school, have you looked in to this? have you applied? have you covered all the other options that are available to you?
Personally i think that your lack self belief and confidence and i'm worried that you think if you loose weight and start stripping you will have a wonderful new life .... not true luv..... I don't see anything wrong in what you are doing but look for a job too or consider going to school. Don't depend on a man who might not be around for ever, or on a stripping career which certainty wont be.... think LONG TERM!
Anyway like pamela said i'm sure you know this already. We are not your parents nor are we here to give you a telling off or a lecture on life, however i want to say this ...I'm around the same age as you ( i'm 20 )... we are young BUT we don't have time to waste so whatever goals you have set for yourself start working towards them NOW! Excuses are for losers!!! I have had private chats with you off SW and i know you are bright ( regardless of what folks here think ) but you need to believe in yourself otherwise who will?
Keep your chin-up and don't let ppl here discourage you from doing what you want to do.... Some times ppl come across as being harsh and mean and sometimes forget that some are more sensitive than others, its unfair but its life and you will come across worse than this when you become a stripper.
Good luck hun.
Seraya.
I'll just add my two cents again (2 + 2 = 4) so my 4 cents haha
Its not that everyone thinks SHE is wrong for doing what she is doing. Like I said, its a cool idea if you are already at your goal. See, she has a goal before she gets the boobs, and thats to lose the 100 lbs. Ok, so once she gets there, then her website would be more appealing to HER because then she can do what it is she has to do. But getting the money NOW, and then waiting a long time to lose all that weight might result in her wasting the money (Now eyez, I am not saying you WILL waste it, just saying it could be a possibility)
Someone mentioned webcam...she could do that to try and get some income. Or like fawn said, a job anywhere, even a fast food place. FOR NOW.
Hun, school only gets harder and harder, and prices are going up. You should take advantage.
Whats sad is people dont TRY. I have to pay a ridiculous amount of money for school but my friend, who has no job, almost gets a free ride. The government helps those who want to go.
Please dontforget about the education as this is the most important thing. Right now, you are young and are probably not thinking about it, but in the longrun you will need it. Good luck anyway...
seraya
02-03-2004, 05:17 PM
Like I said, its a cool idea if you are already at your goal. See, she has a goal before she gets the boobs, and thats to lose the 100 lbs. Ok, so once she gets there, then her website would be more appealing to HER because then she can do what it is she has to do. But getting the money NOW, and then waiting a long time to lose all that weight might result in her wasting the money (Now eyez, I am not saying you WILL waste it, just saying it could be a possibility)
Someone mentioned webcam...she could do that to try and get some income. Or like fawn said, a job anywhere, even a fast food place. FOR NOW.
I don't understand why can't work towards getting the money for a boob job and losing weight at the same time.... its not as if she's gonna raise the £8000 or however much she's asking over night....
So whether she does webcam, works in micky D's or saves the money she get's form donations doesn't make a difference because its still going to take a while to save that much money and by then she probably would have reached her target weight.... Also if she's going to waste the money she's going to do it anyway regardless of where it is coming from.
Its not realistic but its possible and has worked for others so i don't see the problem in her giving it try. The reasons i think she should get a job and go back to school has nothing to do with getting the money for a boob job... but this is not the place for lectures on life she didn't ask for our opinions on school, spelling and getting a job so i won't be saying anymore on that subject here.
Seraya.
no she didnt ask for our opinions on spelling (which I never corrected) but she did ask for advice...asking if it was "stupid" or whatever. In my previous posts I supported her, and still do, but WHILE she is waiting for the bids, she should be doing something constructive while losing weight (yes two things at once)
Lilith
02-03-2004, 05:54 PM
but this is not the place for lectures on life she didn't ask for our opinions on school, spelling and getting a job so i won't be saying anymore on that subject here.
Seraya.
She did ask about spelling. As I have quoted it twice, I'll repeat it a third time, "does spelling really matter?" You said that she might have dyslexia, and she might; that would be an explanation, but it wouldn't help her communicate. People will still skip her posts and ignore her opinions as long as they can't read what she's saying. I'm willing to bet that she does want people to read what she says and pay attention to her opinions.
You can applaud the possibility of dyslexia and stand up for her right to post indecipherable gibberish, but I personally don't think that's very helpful. I might be incorrect, but I think she would rather know how to be a quality member than to be patted on the head, told she is a good person no matter what and still continue to be ignored by most of the board.
Again, not all helpful advice is applause. Not all applause is helpful.
i took my ebay down and made a site like hers sort
www.angelfire.com/vamp/giveboobs
and if any of you feel generous donate at pay pal
[email protected]
Eyez, that new site looks pretty good, but hun, you REALLLLLY have to fix the spelling.
I dont care for anyone to bash me for saying this either. If anyone wants to bash me for saying it, then so be it. CLICK ON THE LINK and see the obvious errors. The site looks pretty good and I see you got 10 bucks so far. Not bad. :)
Do a spell check, or send the info to me, and I'll fix it for you.
Its not DONTAIONS, its DONATIONS... also exotic, not exoic. Know what I mean? It really would help your site a lot more, so if you need help let me know.
Good luck
LoveSexMoney
02-03-2004, 08:22 PM
OK I'll add my 4 cents to Lexi's for a grand total of 8 cents.
The reason why spelling is so important in your site/ebay ad...think of it as your resume. It could even be compared to a stage performance. You're advertising yourself. You don't want it to look sloppy or people might pass you over. What does Human Resources do with a resume filled with gramatical and spelling errors? They toss it in the trash can. Eyez don't let potential bidders/donors (egads i almost wrote donators) pass over your ad.
Other than that I think you've got a real attention grabber. Meaning it's eye catching and fun looking. Now stop taking our directness so personally. ;)
i thank all the girls that have stud by me on here. and i really shun the girls and guys that have seen the need to corect my spelling and grammer. like i said i really could care less about my spelling anyways cause i know you can read my 'gibberish' as some one put it if you cant figure it out sound it out that is how i was taught to spell. and prob will always spell that way! SO GET OVER IT ALLREADY its like beating a dead horse ( i think every one knows that line right?) whats the point when i have already gotten your point umpteen post earlyer! and the boobs do you maybe think i could raise the money while im losing the weight? then have the money when i get done? you know a lil treat to my self! humm? and quit bitchin abou the boob site your not giving money so stop bitching about it! and as far as the job i canot get a joba round here do to i have to travel 20 miles and 2 miles back to have one and $5.50 a hour with 20 hours a week is $110 plus taxes is about 90 and it takes 50$ to fill the tank up wow 50 dollars left for 20 hour week! i have a boob lift by 2006! and i canot sell the truck it is not mine it is my b/f cause my mother never baught me a car like alot of parnets do these days or were never around to take me to work cause we lived in the contry so i had no way to have a job when i was younger to even buy a car see my finachel diffacultys here? more of a reason for me to dance. plus ryan is leaving and i have to have a good paying job cause he willl not be here to suport my ass. and i will be out on the street cause my mothers b/f icked me out of the house and i have no father to live with. so no i canot go back to school i need a damn job that pays and with web camm... ppl dont wanna watch fat girls with dial up they prefure cable and thats 40 bucks a month weres that ganna come from? see my delemas! so why dont you all stop bitching considering you do not know where im at in life
i thank all the girls that have stud by me on here. and i really shun the girls and guys that have seen the need to corect my spelling and grammer. like i said i really could care less about my spelling anyways cause i know you can read my 'gibberish' as some one put it if you cant figure it out sound it out that is how i was taught to spell. and prob will always spell that way! SO GET OVER IT ALLREADY its like beating a dead horse ( i think every one knows that line right?) whats the point when i have already gotten your point umpteen post earlyer! and the boobs do you maybe think i could raise the money while im losing the weight? then have the money when i get done? you know a lil treat to my self! humm? and quit bitchin abou the boob site your not giving money so stop bitching about it! and as far as the job i canot get a joba round here do to i have to travel 20 miles and 2 miles back to have one and $5.50 a hour with 20 hours a week is $110 plus taxes is about 90 and it takes 50$ to fill the tank up wow 50 dollars left for 20 hour week! i have a boob lift by 2006! and i canot sell the truck it is not mine it is my b/f cause my mother never baught me a car like alot of parnets do these days or were never around to take me to work cause we lived in the contry so i had no way to have a job when i was younger to even buy a car see my finachel diffacultys here? more of a reason for me to dance. plus ryan is leaving and i have to have a good paying job cause he willl not be here to suport my ass. and i will be out on the street cause my mothers b/f icked me out of the house and i have no father to live with. so no i canot go back to school i need a damn job that pays and with web camm... ppl dont wanna watch fat girls with dial up they prefure cable and thats 40 bucks a month weres that ganna come from? see my delemas! so why dont you all stop bitching considering you do not know where im at in life
Let me tell you... apparently you can not READ very well either. Now you just deliberately want to piss people off. Like I mentioned, as Sapphire did, YOU HAVE A GOOD IDEA doing the boob site. GOOD FOR YOU. BUT I gave you honest CONSTRUCTIVE criticism (if you dont know what that is, it is something to HELP you, not have you take offense to)
I told you I would HELP YOU OUT with the site spelling and all. In all honesty how the hell do YOU know I would NOTdonate a few bucks, HUH???? If I were browsing and came across your site with all those typos, I would probably think it was a joke, AND THIS IS WHY I OFFERED TO HELP THAT OUT....there was only good intentions in my post but if you cant DECIPHER THAT (meaning understand) then, TOO BAD. Enough of you and your nasty attitude. You need to REALLY read what girls are telling you. If you would reREAD my post you would see that I was not being a bitch, as you have acted towards me.
shedevil4260
02-03-2004, 09:58 PM
I agree Lexi!! :o That was rude...
LoveSexMoney
02-03-2004, 09:59 PM
Wow! I can't believe how gullible I was to even respond to Princess Wah Wah Cry Me A River. I am officially exiting the dressing room drama.
:moped:
If you cant make friends on a website where 90 % of the dancers are NICE to you and offer to help, I wonder how you will make it in the REAL dancing world where MANY are nasty and mean. They will eat you alive
Madcap
02-03-2004, 10:08 PM
Not to mention how she'll react the first time some guy gets all charming "SHOW ME YOUR TITS AND MAYBE I'LL GET A DANCE!!!"
Gynger
02-03-2004, 10:17 PM
I wasn't going to reply to your post xxxeyexxx, but I think you are really misreading what some of the girls are trying to tell you here... so without getting into it, all I am going to say is that criticisim is something as a dancer you have to be able to take, and if you really want to do this, than you need to understand that it comes with the territory. These girls on this site have all been extremely helpful in terms of giving you advice, my suggestion to you is to maybe re think your past posts and see the reponses you've generated from the other girls on this forum for what they are: Advice you asked for. If you didn't want it, you shouldn't have posted.
Gynger
Pamela
02-03-2004, 10:39 PM
Hey Eyez i see someone has already donated $10!!!! Congrats! It takes time, some girls over a year! Stick with your dreams hun!
You can make it all happen.
Pamela
First time poster, long time reader.
Lexi, that was hilarious... dear God, please make it stop.
Sapphire, I really like the idea of setting up a website soliciting donations for your graduate degree... I'm a sucker for a smart girl and I'm sure many guys would contribute if the site is done well. Let me know if you set it up and I'll gladly be the first contributor.
eyez, I agree with you -- on this site you should not have to worry about spelling because you are not selling anything here. Your posts are a little hard to read, but obviously we can all figure them out. But if you are going to solicit donations on the web, you should correct the spelling and grammar because some readers will be more likely to contribute to a bright, promising young lady than one who does not take the time to spell correctly.
In an effort to be constructive, I have copied the text from your website below, with all the spelling and grammar errors corrected to the best of my ability. With a few exceptions (including deleting one sentence I did not understand), I did not modify the content. A skilled marketeer may be able to further improve the message -- it could make a big difference. I hope you will accept my suggestions in the spirit in which they are offered -- just trying to help.
-- revised text below --
Hi my name is Danielle, I am 19 years old and I am in the process of losing 100 pounds to be an exotic dancer. Yes, this is a dream of mine. What is wrong with having cute guys worship the ground you walk on? To help me reach my dream, I am seeking donations. $1, $5, $20, $100... anything you can spare is greatly appreciated. I have been without a job for the past year or so due to the bad economy, and I live in the middle of nowhere; jobs are far and few between. So... if you would like to help make my dream a reality, help me out! After i get my breasts done you are more than welcome to come see me dance! Thank you! Oh yeah, this is for a lift. As you can see, they are not perky like a 19 year old's breasts should be, and they are not exactly the same size (this is to get them fixed).
CURRENT NEWS! I am in the process of signing up with Adam and Eve, such that when you register with Adam and Eve, my boob fund will receive $2 and you get the choice of a FREE -- yes i said FREE -- mature DVD or VHS! Check back for more details in the coming days!
Thank you and have a great day!
Progress
What's to Come
Donations
Give me a break. I don't believe the nearest fast food resturant is 20 miles away. You must really think we're stupid. I worked my ass off for my own car, and untill I got it I took the bus. Besides, towns as small as you are making yours out to be don't tend to have strip clubs like the ones you so desire to become a part of. At least not in Texas, but you sure as hell don't need to travel 20 miles to get to one. And where do all the people in your town work? Even the most back woods towns have places like retirement homes. I even bet ther is a local child care place or after school type thing. Those places are always looking for help. And even better, running around with kids will burn that fat. Where do you buy clothes, or groceries? From a local store no doubt. What about gas stations? Every towns got them. Excuses, excuses. And this 20 hour a week thing, what the hell else are you doing with your time that you can't lose weight, or work. I am a full time student with a full time job as a waitress making $2.13 an hour, and then a twice a week 8 hour shift job as a dancer. I don't qualify for financial aid, I have no health insurance, I pay my own car insurance, and yes I live with my mother who just lost her job, and I pay 1/3 of the bills. I did most of that before I even started dancing. I don't think your idea was stupid, but I do now think you are a winey little brat who expects others to just hand you things.
I did start out being a bitch to you on this thread, and I intended to. Your acting like a total dumbass. I don't give a shit about your spelling. Thats not why I don't like you. Yes, I said I don't like you. Why? Because you sit around and just expect things to happen for you, without giving yourself a little push. Maybe I'm jealouse that I have had to work for all kinds of things that you expect to be handed to you. Take my best friend for example: His mother was a crack addict (though a very nice lady, and I do love her),She could not hold a jod, he dropped out at 16 due to reacurring health problems which turned out to be Type 1 diabetes, They spent years living in her beat up old Monte Carlo, he even stayed there while she was in jail,. 4 yrs later he has his own apartment, never gratuated, but has a decent job as a manager of a video store,(I bet you have one of these too), has his own car, which his mom is now on his insurance as with most 19 yr olds it is the other way around, and he manages his diabetes through diet though he does get sick because of bad circulation because he hates to excersize. He pulled him self out of hell, you can't even pull your self out of your warped little mind and in your tiny town. And I'm known as the nice and sweet one in my club. My advice, take it however you want is quite bitching and make your own dreams happen, cause no one else will.
thank you for the spelling corestion THAT IS THE RIGHT WAY TO DO IT! i dont think spelling should really matter all that much in here any ways but yeah i do agree with the donation thing. thank you and thanks pamela:) you always make me smile!
LoveSexMoney
02-03-2004, 11:13 PM
:banghead:
Madcap
02-03-2004, 11:17 PM
:rotfl:
Actually, it's "Actually, it's 'correction'."
Lilith
02-03-2004, 11:21 PM
*pops popcorn*
This just gets better by the minute. Why bother spending (wasting) precious time beating my brains out to find just the right phrases which might help her yet not offend her, when I can have so much more fun just hitting the refresh button?
what the fuck have i ever done to you for you not too like me?
if you dont belive me look it up on a map i live in exira iowa town of 1,500! we have a caseys that never hires(the lady have all worked there for at leased 15 years they arnt goin no where) 3 bar terrys jt;s and legaceys, and a trift store! the closet town is 20 miles!(atlantic)
why dont you shut your mouth before you say things you dont know! as far as a club its in des moine 68 miles away i will travel just because its good money if you would have read my past post some other person who didnt care to pay attentionand jump to conclushions said the same thing!
and as for getting up off my ass i have achived alot of things in my life! i stoped drinkin im a recoverintg alcky at the age of 19! thats one of the hardest things you will ever do! i got kicked out of my moms house at 16 and some how manged to not prostatute my self to survive. im not pregnat i dont have any std's i think iv done alright so far!
oh yeah with the clothes and food and what not we get them in atlantic 20 miles away! the closest wallmart is 60 miles away! and i will never work in a retirment home due to i dont like to be around old people because death fucks me up alot i have a mad case of getting depressed when people are dead dieing or verry hurt.
also my mother was not home because she had to suport me and my 2 sisters plus a very bad custody battel plus my bills from when i have been in and out of the hospital and when i was in res. care from 10 months laweyer bills are now in the $30,000 range my bills 9,000 range plus the normal bills of living, she was working her ass of to do that and had no time to take me to work or pic me up we live 7 miles out im the country and take 2 hours to walk in trust me i have done it!
and as far as asking for donations why dont you bitch at people who have title 19 or wellfare or food stamps it the same thing baby! asking ppl for help! maybe the boobs arnt nessasry but its still asking for help none the less!! bitch at them!
hahah please, I know my punctuation and spelling, I dont feel the need to quote.
Lilith
02-03-2004, 11:24 PM
I see she took my pointer about the punctuation. One had hoped for periods, but exclamation points will do nicely.