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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
mediocrity
No, it's kind of a fact. 99% of us dancers either find you to be a) disgusting or b) insufferable.
So much for you loving strippers because they certainly don't love you.
Then why don't all of you just ignore him and he'll go away because he'll have no-one to talk to. Unless you all enjoy suffereing and being disgusted.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Hopper
^If you are really annoyed of offended by him, you can just put him on ignore. Live and let live. You and mediocrity sound like you enjoy the conflict. You talk to him a lot for someone you can't stand.
...thief, stealing my lines! No plagiarizing in the novel thread!:D
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
JayATee
For what? No one liking you? Ok... praise the lord no one likes you.
Umm... but what exactly did I "let out of my chest"? LoL.
I got it. No one likes me. Now, can we move on?
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Hopper
^If you are really annoyed of offended by him, you can just put him on ignore. Live and let live. You and mediocrity sound like you enjoy the conflict. You talk to him a lot for someone you can't stand.
I have to modify my original statement to this:
I think both of them have crush on us. :D lol :D
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
mediocrity
No, it's kind of a fact. 99% of us dancers either find you to be a) disgusting or b) insufferable.
So much for you loving strippers because they certainly don't love you.
I will never stop loving strippers. This novel will be dedicated to strippers of SW who taught me so much about the pole dancing world.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
I don't have any problem with you trying to write Cyril. Just yea you're going to get criticism if you ask, and the stripper/pl plot-line seems a bit.. hmm.. obsessive? And yea you were goading JayATee with the gothic comment in some thread where you felt it necessary to point out "yea there will be a gothic chick". When you goad people they tend to react badly along with their friends. Common sense. You can't really be surprised by that reaction.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
xdamage
Reminds me of something a physics teacher once taught us. Cold is the lack of heat/energy, the natural state when everything is at rest, motionless, lifeless... that image stuck with me. You argued above that you felt it was not important to try and radiate any emotions in your writing... thus cold.
Right now we are dealing with narration and people who are cold (military type). Once the love scenes come into play, you will get your fill.
Keep in mind, our lead man has not entered the scene yet.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
xdamage
I don't have any problem with you trying to write Cyril. Just yea you're going to get criticism if you ask, and the stripper/pl plot-line seems a bit.. hmm.. obsessive? And yea you were goading JayATee with the gothic comment in some thread where you felt it necessary to point out "yea there will be a gothic chick". When you goad people they tend to react badly along with their friends. Common sense. You can't really be surprised by that reaction.
Why was that goading? It seems like you take extreme liberty to classify my post as whatever you feel like. In this case it became "goading". You have a tendency of stroking fire. I have noticed that time and time again.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
verfolgung
^^^ This means a lot coming from someone who routinely likes to comment on things he has no clue about.
I am someone who has courage to go against the current.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
mediocrity
You're evading the issue. You have SPECIFICALLY STATED (and I will find posts and quote 'em for backup) that this is a dancer and "PL" (<--disgusting term by the way) story.
And PS. Your storyline blows, no matter what you deem it to be about for the moment.
It is a love story between a PL and a stripper. It will show triumph of love over greed and lust. It will show two hearts connecting amidst war and darkness; kind of like a lotus blooming from the mud.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
I am someone who has courage to go against the current.
...well, I agree with that. However, its not getting you very far.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
WiseGuy_TX
...well, I agree with that. However, its not getting you very far.
Define far in this context.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
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Originally Posted by
verfolgung
I am someone who has courage to go against the current.
It doesn't take courage to give baseless advice. It merely takes ignorance and indifference - two things which you appear to have plenty of, especially when it comes to the topic of SCs.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
Define far in this context.
...keep swimming with those iron sword headed sharks against the current Cyril, keep swimming.:D
Its time for the next chapter or better yet, the ending.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
I got it. No one likes me. Now, can we move on?
Why? It's fun. And you never move on when asked to.
As a matter of fact, I think I'll just continue to insist upon this one set of facts and refuse to see what anyone else has written about it so I can continue to infuriate everyone. But truly this is probably too subtle for you to understand and a waste of time...
BTW you still didn't tell me what I let out of my chest. Im quite curious about that.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
JayATee
BTW you still didn't tell me what I let out of my chest. Im quite curious about that.
That you do not care ...........
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
It is a love story between a PL and a stripper. It will show triumph of love over greed and lust. It will show two hearts connecting amidst war and darkness; kind of like a lotus blooming from the mud.
How is your main character a stripper? Doesn't seem like she works in a SC or does private parties.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
mediocrity
How is your main character a stripper? Doesn't seem like she works in a SC or does private parties.
Just hold on and be patient, let the story unfold. You are displaying the same degree of impatience you displayed on Dream Girls thread.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
That you do not care ...........
That was sarcasm. People don't let things out of their chest, they let things off their chest, Mr. Epic Novel writer.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
Just hold on and be patient, let the story unfold. You are displaying the same degree of impatience you displayed on Dream Girls thread.
It's ok. You're displaying the same level of stupidity.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
Chapter – Six
The Sniff
Sethos and his team crossed the mountain and green Celtic valley was in front of them. The men were spellbound to see such beautiful landscape. They had setup a command and control center from where they were carrying out their patrols to locate nearby towns and villages in a very stealthy manner.
“Are all the patrols back, Nikon?”
“Yes, all parties are back. I have some good news for you Sethos.” There was visible excitement on Nikon’s face. He continued, “Anatole’s team has spotted a town.” Nikon handed Sethos the cartographical data prepared by Anatole’s team.
“The town is little bit far from here but we can start with the near by villages first.”
“No.” Sethos interrupted Nikon’s speech. “The town may have a garrison and raiding the villages first may alert them. Let us conduct a reconnaissance on the town first.”
“Who would you like to go for the reconnaissance mission?” Nikon asked.
“Send Anatole. He is already familiar with the location. Rest of us will stay put here till Anatole and his team is back.” Sethos ended the briefing with those remarks.
Anatole was a fugitive who came to Sethos from the east. His first test came during a mission Sethos took inside Carthage territory. Anatole spotted and gathered reconnaissance on a fort believed to have been housing several women for Carthage royals. The reconnaissance work done by Anatole was excellent resulting in Sethos getting his hands on several beautiful and trained entertainers at no casualty.
It was beginning to get dark when Anatole’s party arrived at the periphery of this Celtic town. They decided to find a hiding place and stayed put till it became darker. Only after it was completely dark that Anatole and his small team ventured towards the town. He thanked goddess Selene for staying out of the sky and not lighting the town tonight; it made his mission much easier.
The town was fairly large; with the grace of Tyche, they will be able to snatch at least fifty women from this town alone but towns of this size always had a military garrison. It was Anatole’s task to find out the location of garrison’s barracks, its numerical strength, its patrolling tactics, its weapons’ capabilities and whether it could call upon a nearby reinforcement. The fate of the mission relied on Anatole gathering accurate intelligence on this town.
Anatole and his team did a very thorough job in finding out all the pertinent information. They stayed at the location for several days, hiding during the day and venturing out at night. Now, it was time to return to the command and control center with all the vital intelligence.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
JayATee
That was sarcasm. People don't let things out of their chest, they let things off their chest, Mr. Epic Novel writer.
In that case, I am glad you let it off of your chest.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
mediocrity
It's ok. You're displaying the same level of stupidity.
You are not qualified to call others stupid. It is like pot calling kettle black.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
Out of curiosity, where are you from, Cyril?
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Elvia
Out of curiosity, where are you from, Cyril?
Why the curiosity? :D
(Just curious.)