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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Elvia
Out of curiosity, where are you from, Cyril?
He never answers this question... probably something to do with privacy... only everyone else is expected to tell the truth. ::)
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
...Cyril is from the land of voltabianca (which has gone offline) where PL's dream about loving strippers. Hence the novel.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
JayATee
He never answers this question... probably something to do with privacy... only everyone else is expected to tell the truth. ::)
I have given way too much information about myself and I regret that already.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
WiseGuy_TX
...Cyril is from the land of voltabianca (which has gone offline) where PL's dream about loving strippers. Hence the novel.
Although your post does not deserve a response but I will indulge.
The novel does encapsulate my fantasy about strippers. The lead man will be my alter ego, a man I could have become, i.e., a lover of a stripper.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
You are not qualified to call others stupid. It is like pot calling kettle black.
Haha, wow. Coming from Captain Would You Like A Squishy. Good times.
I have a dual degree in Mathematics and Molecular Biology from a University that is considered the Harvard of Canada. No way in hell are you callin' me stupid.
Though at least by calling yourself the pot, you are admitting some level of idiocy.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
mediocrity
Haha, wow. Coming from Captain Would You Like A Squishy. Good times.
I have a dual degree in Mathematics and Molecular Biology from a Univeristy that is considered the Harvard of Canada. No way in hell are you callin' me stupid.
Though at least by calling yourself the pot, you are admitting some level of idiocy.
I have said it before and I will say it again. I seriously <3 you.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
Chapter – Six
The Sniff
... Anatole and his team did a very thorough job in finding out all the pertinent information. They stayed at the location for several days, hiding during the day and venturing out at night. Now, it was time to return to the command and control center with all the vital intelligence.
This is the supposed to be the story of a "stipper and a PL" right?
Why did the reconnaissance patrol have to sneak around? They should have just sent a messenger to the town elders and asked to schedule a private tour. That way they wouldn't have to risk any casualties blindly. ;)
http://forum.stripperweb.com/showthr...94#post1833794
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
JayATee
I have said it before and I will say it again. I seriously <3 you.
You love her because she is being mean to me.
Will a love based on such weak foundation stand the real test?
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
mediocrity
Haha, wow. Coming from Captain Would You Like A Squishy. Good times.
What does that mean? /:O
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Originally Posted by
mediocrity
I have a dual degree in Mathematics ...
Go for triple next time.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
You love her because she is being mean to me.
Will a love based on such weak foundation stand the real test?
Don't worry, our wedding is next week.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
verfolgung
Why did the reconnaissance patrol have to sneak around? They should have just sent a messenger to the town elders and asked to schedule a private tour. That way they wouldn't have to risk any casualties blindly. ;)
There is a difference between a military operation and a business operation. Just an FYI for you.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
There is a difference between a military operation and a business operation. Just an FYI for you.
...the Iraqis would disagree.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
WiseGuy_TX
...the Iraqis would disagree.
Military operation can be needed to safeguard a business operation but it is conducted differently.
In the case of Iraq, military operation was used to take over its business operation (oil).
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
Military operation can be needed to safeguard a business operation but it is conducted differently.
In the case of Iraq, military operation was used to take over its business operation (oil).
...yes, that's one way to look at.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
WTF is this? "Closer" meets the "300"? I've just returned from the desert (viva LV) and I'm having a hard time reading this while keeping my oil lamp lit in my Bedouin tent cuz I'm loling so hard.
First rule of marketing: Know Your Audience
Hard to fault Cyril here cuz, like the DreamGirls thread, he posts strictly for the mob living in his brain. I'm afraid the rest of us must stew in our envy.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
mediocrity
Don't worry, our wedding is next week.
Promises promises!
Only in my dreams. ;)
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
resulting in Sethos getting his hands on several beautiful and trained entertainers at no casualty.
OK, I'd love to hear how he did that! I always get tazed. :O
But seriously, I am pretty sure they weren't called "entertainers." That's a bit of an anachronism, isn't it?
P.S. JayATee, bring back the old avatar!
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Shy_Guy
OK, I'd love to hear how he did that! I always get tazed. :O
...SG, Cyril has a fetish for "trained strippers". We see this theme here and we saw it in the Dream Girls thread. I thought Cyril would have fallen in love with mediocrity with all her math training. Maybe it's just "Stepford Wife" training he craves. ..oh well.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
mediocrity
Haha, wow. Coming from Captain Would You Like A Squishy. Good times.
I have a dual degree in Mathematics and Molecular Biology from a University that is considered the Harvard of Canada. No way in hell are you callin' me stupid.
Though at least by calling yourself the pot, you are admitting some level of idiocy.
He called you the pot.
Not sure I believe you about the dual degree. A dual degree holder wouldn't entertain herself by talking to an idiot, even for laughs (and I am not laughing). I suspect that this claim is part of the mindfuck.
If you do have a degree, I must conclude that you don't really think Cyril is stupid.
QED
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
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Originally Posted by
Hopper
^If you are really annoyed of offended by him, you can just put him on ignore. Live and let live. You and mediocrity sound like you enjoy the conflict. You talk to him a lot for someone you can't stand.
I have to modify my original statement to this:
I think both of them have crush on us. :D lol :D
Nah, I doubt either of them would want to do anything that might jeapordize the bromance between you and Hopper. :D
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
... It is better to prove your intellect by your writing capabilities because that is the only tangible means we have to assess each others intellect. ...
Really? So how do we "assess" someone who doesn't even grasp the proper use of articles (a/an/the) in their writing?
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Originally Posted by
Cyril
<Inserts in RED>
Chapter – Four
The Route
... “Yesterday, I had an in depth discussion with Nikon regarding our upcoming expedition to an unknown land called Hibernia. (If it's "unknown" how did they know to name it?) After considering arguments for and against the expedition, I have decided to go forth with it.” Sethos paused briefly and then continued, “We will set sail from Konossos towards <Deleted "the"> Sarausa. ... According to my information <the> Carthage navy has approximately three hundred warships...
“Should we co-ordinate our sail so that we leave Sarausa in the early evening to avoid detection by <the> Carthage navy?” ... Any contact with <the> Carthage navy would be fatal for the mission and the crews. ...
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
^ Change "unknown" to "unexplored."
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Shy_Guy
^ Change "unknown" to "unexplored."
You are correct. "Unexplored" would have been a better choice of word. But keep in mind when you are attempting to write a novel, grammar is the last thing your mind is thinking about; you have to think about geography, history, customs, etc. It is an interesting experience though. I am loving it.
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
verfolgung
Really? So how do we "assess" someone who doesn't even grasp the proper use of articles (a/an/the) in their writing?
Dude,
Relax! We do acknowledge your status as an exemplary PL. You are in no danger of loosing it. No one can challenge you for that status.
:D
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Re: Novel: Immaculate Love
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Originally Posted by
Shy_Guy
But seriously, I am pretty sure they weren't called "entertainers." That's a bit of an anachronism, isn't it?
Entertainers were called entertainers. Of course.