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    I like writing poems, and I only do it when I'm inspired. Sometimes I can go for a year without writing a poem, because I wasn't inspired and sometimes I can write a few in a week. This was the last poem that I wrote. Let me know what you think ladies. And if you have any poems or short stories that you would like to share, please feel free. I'm also interested in getting into writing short stories. Erotica type...
    This is called The V-Shape:

    Wet like passion
    Trailing down her legs
    With tremendous worth.
    Feeling that pulsating tongue
    Like a vibrator on wet skin,
    Fostering itself within the V-Shape.

    Plunging deeper into this lustful depth
    Waiting breathlesly for her moment to arrive,
    Pushing pleasure from bottom, to middle, to top
    Eventually escaping through the edge of her eye
    Streaming down to the bend of her cheek
    Then dropping so gracefully, sending its waves down her back,
    Harboring within the V-Shape.
    My Motto: Ignore any negativity directed towards you, unless...!

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    I was looking for a poem I thought I had on my blog....but I couldn't find it. This is a little short story or beginning or a story, its pretty rough and I wrote it a little whie ago.


    Her eyes are like daggers that tear out my truth, she haunts me and she won't let me go. She always smelled like a lady, I could eat her skin. Her youth was entrancing for I associated it with innocence, and she did possess innocence, but not in the ways that I thought. She was all small and tan, delicate hands with white tipped nails, a pretty purse and nice shoes. Her stomach was perfect, I couldn't help but touch her, couldn't help but want to kiss her finely shaped lips, couldn't help but act on that desire.

    She was not nave but I had her that night when we sat there and she didn't want to go. She walked in with a cigarette and asked for a light, she was like a woman but she wasn't. I'm not one to be made nervous by girls, but with her I hadn't a clue what to say. She made me feel like a little boy again, her smile made me look away. It was so harmless at first, so innocent, for four nights we just laid there and talked and touched and thought about more but let it stay in our heads. Finally we surrendered to the tension that had been there since we met when she peered over her sunglasses at me and murmured an unimpressed "hi" , since I found out she was only 16.

    I was jaded and I told her about the stripper that had broken my heart and that made her trust me. Two people who agreed that you need to be cautious because you never know what goes on in another persons head. She was the 1st girl I even thought of being with in such a long time. She had kept such a guard up at 1st, she was a tease, a professional manipulator and I saw her walls and all her past melt away with me.

    "You're the kind of girl I'd fall in love with, but if I had met you when I was your age I would have ruined your life." She laughed like a sigh, nervous but concealing it.

    I'd ignore her for weeks at a time and then we'd end up together again, she'd take me to do laundry, so cleverly dressed in her bright gauchos that clung to the form of her ass and a little top that showed off her edible skin.

    "You're so beautiful," I'd say as she pulled herself around in a laundry cart, acting coy and careless.

    "Doesn't do you any good," I couldn't look at her straight, I'd just tell her not to be like that.

    "We're gonna get married someday and it's gonna suck."

    I'd say how I wanted her to stay over like old times but we couldn't have sex because I loved having her around and she was my best friend and then I'd feel guilty and that's why I would end up avoiding her. Then I'd give into the scent of her Victoria Secrete lotion and those tiny lace shorts she so deliberately wore. She would snuggle next to me and I could never stop myself from kissing her neck and she would sigh and press against me more.

    "Don't start it if you're going to make a big deal when we finish it."

    "I wasn't going to but you're so softI'm sorry". This laugh would be low in her throat, calculated and amused. We had created an art out of these encounters.

    We'd speak less then she ended up drunk at my house after some men tried to take her into the club. I was drunk too and I'd tear her apart, taking my hate out on her.

    "You're so cute I'd just like to cum on your face, then every time I see you I can think about it."

    People would talk when she was there morning after morning, this stunning Lolita everyone knew.


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    Here comes Sweatpant Boner Man,
    Getting some love the only way he can -
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    That is beautiful!

    I have some but it's not erotica. I wrote 2 lullaby's for my children.


    Elijah's Lullaby

    Go to sleep, my baby go to sleep, for when you sleep the world is at
    peace. Go to sleep and close your eyes and you'll dream of angels
    tonight.

    As I lay you down to rest know that I am always near If you ever feel
    frighten or in distress just call and I'll be here.

    In your dreams you can be anything a cloud in the sky a dragon that
    flies a picture, a poem, a star. You can climb a big mountain or even
    play a guitar.

    Go to sleep, my baby go to sleep, for when you sleep the world is at
    peace. Go to sleep and close your eyes and you'll dream of angels
    tonight.

    With this kiss I give my child just know that it's for a little while
    that you and I will be apart but never far from my heart.

    So may sweet dreams come to you and nothing frightful at all I hope
    you remember your journey so when you wake you can tell me it all.

    Go to sleep, my baby go to sleep, for when you sleep the world is at
    peace. Go to sleep and close your eyes and you'll dream of angels
    tonight.


    __________________________________________________ _____________________________


    Julian's Lullaby


    Close your eyes my baby
    Close your eyes and drift away
    Close your eyes and dream a dream
    of the things you did today.

    Run around a crowd of stars
    Play around with the clouds
    Dance a dance with the moon
    Tell the sun you love it too.

    Fly around the sky so high
    Feel free as a bird
    don't hold back and don't be shy
    embrace it all.

    Rest your head on a tree
    Rest your head in your dream
    Rest your head and feel the breeze coming to you.

    If you happen to dream of me
    I want you to know my child
    That I will probably be dreaming of
    you too.



    Close your eyes my baby
    Close your eyes and drift away
    Close your eyes and dream a dream
    of the things you did today.

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    This one is called Reflection

    Reflection

    What do you see through your eyes when you look at yourself in the mirror?
    Do you see the past wrapped up in your smile or does the future appear in the lines under your eyes?
    Is there a glimpse of happiness when you stare for more than just a minute or does sadness plague you, does it stare back looking taunting and mock you?
    Do you shy away or do you focus on imperfections you see that you didn't notice the last time you looked at yourself?
    Do you feel the need to make a unnatural face just to make yourself seem younger?
    Do you purposely try to make marks appear to see just what you might look like in the future?
    Do you look and like what looks at you back?
    Are you critical?
    Are you harsh?
    Are you real?
    Are YOU, you?
    Do you still recognize the person who is staring at you or do you think a stranger is at the other side staring back?
    Does the image you see define who you are?
    Do you wonder if those who surround you see in you what you see in yourself?
    Do you wish to not see you ever again?
    Did you know that your beauty is never measured by that image?
    DO you know that to someone that image is the essence of what beauty represents?
    Did you know that your face is the last beautiful image someone has when they close their eyes?
    Did you know you ARE beautiful?

    You are.

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    hey Taylorlila, i love the short story. is it fiction or non-fiction? does it end there or theres more?

    High_Heel_Lover, I love the lullabies. They are very soothing. Not often do I come across poems like those. Especially when you repeat the main verse, "Go to sleep, my baby go to sleep, for when you sleep the world is at
    peace. Go to sleep and close your eyes and you'll dream of angels
    tonight." I'm sure your kids love them.
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    Quote Originally Posted by LadySoft View Post
    hey Taylorlila, i love the short story. is it fiction or non-fiction? does it end there or theres more?

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    Its kinda both, its inspired by things that have happened in my life and was supposed to be the beginnings of something, but I have such a writers block! Its awful I used to write all the friggen time.


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    High Heel Lover - I really like the Reflection piece.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Taylorlila View Post
    Its kinda both, its inspired by things that have happened in my life and was supposed to be the beginnings of something, but I have such a writers block! Its awful I used to write all the friggen time.
    I hate writer's block. I only get that when it comes to writing music, but i always do well with collaborations. i don't know, I just never get writer's block when it comes to writing poetry and short stories. maybe is because I give myself enough time to meditate on the piece first b4 it hits the paper. meditation can take up to a week or two.
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    Thanks.

    Yeah the kids get a kick out of them. I can actually get the baby to go to sleep with his, Julian's one and if he's not quite asleep yet then he grabs my face and says 'again?" lol

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    I have to say that what stops me from writing a lot is my poor grammar but I have a lot of poems, I just am not sure if I used the correct word lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by High_Heel_Lover View Post
    Thanks.

    Yeah the kids get a kick out of them. I can actually get the baby to go to sleep with his, Julian's one and if he's not quite asleep yet then he grabs my face and says 'again?" lol
    aww thats really sweet... you'd be surprised how long those lullabies will stick with them. some adults still remember lullabies from childhood.
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    I've written some erotic short stories before; will probably do it again. My best story that I've finished is http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh....php?id=106674


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    I read 2 pages of the story, i think its an awesome piece of work. Well written
    and I love your usage of symbolism...how long have you been writing?
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    *shrugs* It's kind of been my thing. Poetry, short erotic fiction, and children's stories--kind of eclectic, right? November's going to be a big month for me; with NaNoWriMo, I'll be writing essentially 6X more than "Issues," which is the longest story I've ever completed. We'll just have to see how that goes.

    I'm glad you enjoyed it; thank you for reading it.


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