Got an A!!!
18.5 out of 20.
I'm actually kinda disappointed. I thought it was better than that. Apparently, I had a few citation errors.
But I was quite proud of it.
so yeah. One class done, 3 to go!
( I will finish that class with an A as well!)
Got an A!!!
18.5 out of 20.
I'm actually kinda disappointed. I thought it was better than that. Apparently, I had a few citation errors.
But I was quite proud of it.
so yeah. One class done, 3 to go!
( I will finish that class with an A as well!)
Congrats! What class was this for (sorry if you've told before in another thread and I missed it)
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oh, English comp 2
Can we read it?
sure, send me your email address and I will send it.
But...although I'm proud of it...I'm not thatgreat of a writer...it's nothign very exciting....
Not everyday you can write an essay that's "been done before" and get a great grade!! Unless it hasn't been.....das why we gotta see!
okay I'm making it public bc I'm just at that spam tipping point where I need like 5 more a day b4 I delete and start afresh.....
calling all trollholio's!
[email protected]
^ I just presented it in a manner that could change people's minds. I attempted to appeal to prudes, by posting facts on why it's in THEIR benifit to approve of legal prostitution. There was no emotion or opinion involoved..just...like sales....why it is benificial to them.
nevermind![]()
I thought it was good, although licensing doesn't keep underage girls from becoming prostitutes, it just keeps them out of the legal brothels. Your paper was well-written though, so stop saying it wasn't. Congrats!
I take it you never got ahold of the mayor? Bummer. I was interested to hear what he had to say about the impact on rural communities.
no, he never called back or replied to email...I was looking foward to talking to him.
no, lisencing doesn;'t keep under age off the streets...and there are many, many other issues I didn't address,or ignored to paint prostitution in it's best light.... I could have gone into much deeper detail, but there was a 1,000 word limit, and i was over 1200, so I had to shut up...
I think I mentioned before, the more I learned, the more problems I discovered, and the more I relaized ther ewas no perfect solution..... I just decided on what I thought was the best solution...and nothing will ever be perfect, there will always be problems with it, underage girls, drug addicts, pimps..that will never go away completly...
I hate when they give you these complex topics and not enough room to cover them!
the essay was on a local problem/solution.
Many many people choose to do their paper on the water issue in Vegas. boring. One girl did her's on prostitution as well. and her solution was to teach family's stronger values, because the lack of values leads to the corruption of girls. which leads to them becomming prostituties....![]()
I'm mad that no one has replied to my spam offer just yet.But that was a striking paper, Kaylinn, nice!
^ check ur email
lol that was so un-spam! i loved it! love gettin learned upon at this hour by my best friends sw'ers. i'm so bored. write another! sike
LOL. Wanna read my essay on how to make a peanut butter and jelly sandwich? LMAO
yes.
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As someone who lives in a country where prostitution is legal.. I would love to read it and see what your take on it all is from the standpoint where it is not... my email address is on my website www.goldcoastgirl.com
enter: E3167322D9 for your 10% discount
i wanna read it. will you PM it to me?
I thought it was a great essay, Kaylinn!!!
Awesome!!





Good Job!!!! You'll ace your next classes too!
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English 102!!?!?! Wowza! That could be a solid 'A' in any 200+ level womens studies course. I really enjoyed reading your essay, Kaylinn. It leaves me wanting to know more. Perhaps you can give Melissa Farley a run for her money.
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