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    Default ok. two things:

    1- in an effort to to do something sexy for my husband, i'm writing him a short little erotica story, but i've run into a problem as far as wordage; i need more wors for "vagina" that are hot. haha.. VJJ is wonderful, but not hot. help?

    2-while searching for hot words for a vagina, i came across this detailed discription which had me ROTFLMAO.

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    lol
    "The vagina is sometimes referred to as the 'front door to life'

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    front bum!

    Feature costumes for sale!

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    Default Re: ok. two things:

    First off, great idea! I started doin that once but chickened out... I should really finish it.

    Second, how bout pussy, cunt? ... Downstairs? Box... oyster, flower, velvet somethinorother...

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    Default Re: ok. two things:

    Quote Originally Posted by blayze View Post
    1- in an effort to to do something sexy for my husband, i'm writing him a short little erotica story, but i've run into a problem as far as wordage; i need more wors for "vagina" that are hot. haha.. VJJ is wonderful, but not hot. help?

    2-while searching for hot words for a vagina, i came across this detailed discription which had me ROTFLMAO.
    I somehow didn't find that website funny. Maybe I didn't "get it".

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    Default Re: ok. two things:

    tunnel of passion maybe?

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    Oh, wow, I ran "vagina" through my standard thesaurus. No results.

    Squishmitten? Maybe not.

    External os? Probably a little clinical.

    Opening, cleft, slit, combined with dripping, drenched, flowing?

    I have no imagination, sorry. Good luck.

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    I like slit.

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    Foof? Foofy? Fnoofy? Foofoo?



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    Tunnel of love?
    Face Hugger?
    Pussy?
    Downtown?
    Love Juice Canal? (no I'm being silly here... too much Lady Blue)
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    Hoo, hoo-ha, ding, that pretty pink


    totally kidding.

    Jay Zeno, those were aiight! hehe

    I HIGHLY recommend reading this---I still have yet to see a piece of erotica that turns me on so much and is so beautifully written:



    (He details going down on a woman under the table in a restaurant )

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    Not to shamelessly plug, but a mighty okay source...

    "The purpose of today's How-To can be summarized in two words: 'connotation' and 'context.' Words all have a particular flavor. That's connotation. 'Voluptuous' and 'obese' both mean there's a little extra cushion for the pushin, but which one is the hero going to use to describe the heroine without getting slapped? It's important to be able to identify the flavor of a word before using it. Why does this matter? Characterization is one reason. By opting for a word with a particular connotation, you provide information about how the character thinks and talks. A virginal princess is not going to command the first male she's ever seen in her tower, 'Ram me with your hot dick, honey!' It's just not consistent. Likewise, it's unlikely that Average Biker Joe Hunglikeahorse will coo, 'Baby, let me get in that sweet yoni of yours.' Not all words were created equal, my friend. Knowing when to use them is 'context.'"

    So what's your particular flavor? What do you feel comfortable with? How raunchy or sensual is your story? That's what will ultimately lead you to genital synonyms that you feel comfortably aroused by.


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    Default Re: ok. two things:

    I wrote a short erotic story for my husband for valentines day as well. With him being half way around the world it's the pretty much the closet way for us to get any action right now haha!

    I used this website to get inspiration http://www.lustylibrary.com/index.php. Some of the stories are good...some a little silly.

    I agree that the word slit is a good one. Does your husband have a special name for it? Use whatever he calls in the story when you can. My husband has a name for mine but it's sort of not that sexy...except to us ha!

    Have fun !
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    Default Re: ok. two things:

    A girl I dated called hers "my muff".

    hb

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    I've always been partial to "punani."

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    Default Re: ok. two things:

    It's not the words you choose that count. It's the impact of the words on him. The story is designed to unfold in his mind and world.

    I'm going to disagree with a few things said in the thread.

    I am assuming you are writing erotica, rather than a personal romantic story. The rules for the latter are different.

    OK, for erotica:

    First, don't use the words for vagina he already uses. One of the purposes of erotica is to create an erotic, unfamiliar, exciting reality. You do that by creating a scene or story that hits his triggers, but does it by creating a world that is dirtier, nastier, hotter than he's used to. You want to use the words he's too timid to use, or thinks you might find objective or offensive. But since you are using them, that makes it doubly hot to him.

    So your dirtier/hotter choices are better: twat, pussy, cunt, fuckhole, etc. But in the body of the story, you don't actually use the words a lot -- you may use one or two to set a paragraph, then use suggestion, positioning or a softer word when you are in the action:

    Let's say you are describing how you like it when he goes down on you.

    "When I feel the force of your full body on top of mine, faces so close we kiss, or nuzzle, or I softly sense the scent of sweat, or hair or skin from your body, I relax and smile, so happy to have you with me, me holding you in my arms. But I quickly stiffen when I feel you slowly slide down my body, arms caressing my sides, your face kissing my tits, licking my nipples, your right hand swiftly sliding between my legs and pressing firmly against my wet pussy, while your face remains over my chest, your tongue exploring my nipples softly at first, and then harder, then lightly biting them. You press the palm of your hand between my legs hard against my mound and hold it there, and I raise my back to push against you, and then your fingers start to play with me, tease me, flicking back and forth over my lips, one finger, then two, just barely sliding in. You bring your face over my belly and kiss it so gently, then begin to lick down my stomach, slowly, moving down to where your hand is now caressing me. Your tongue slides easily over my clit, where you stop and press your full tongue against it so I can feel it, and I moan with pleasure as your soft, wet tongue slides over my clit, making it disappear completely.

    You bring your tongue up firmly against my clit and suddenly push my entire body up hard on the bed, so quickly I almost hit my head, and I spread my arms out just so I don't fall off the bed. I look down and you are kneeling, holding me up with one arm around the waist, the other hand playing with my twat, your tongue flicking furiously over my clit, as I collapse, moaning and running my hands over your broad shoulders, then down to your arms where I caress them as you are licking me. I lift my head off the pillow to watch you licking me, long strokes, over and over, and I can barely hold my head up any more and then suddenly you slide two fingers into my dripping snatch, arched up, pulling me even closer. I groan and whisper, "finger-fuck my cunt, hard," and instantly you start thrusting both fingers in and out, finger-fucking me with such force I can't move and now finally my head just collapses on the pillow, my mouth wide open with nothing coming out at all but my rapid breathing. "Fucking harder," I say, gasping for breath as I feel your fingers ramming into me, banging up against my softest spots, with your mouth pressing down from above, tongue licking my clit long and hard and persistently and deliberately and constantly, over and over, for what seems like forever, and I hear the pounding of your fingers and feel them deep inside me and slapping against me, and then I feel it build, just slightly, so I push my pussy harder against you and close my eyes and then suddenly it rises so quickly, so fucking fast I wasn't prepared for it, and I grab your hair with both hands but then it plateaus, with my mouth frozen open, and so you pick up speed, your fingers a fucking blur of thrusting, and I break through the plateau and peak so fucking hard I bang away three more times, so fast and intense and explosive that this endless fucking scream erupts from my throat, my body shaking, and I grab your hair and push you away, "No, no, stop, it's too much," because I'm overwhelmed by these rolling orgasms that have control of my body and I've become so sensitive that I need some space. So you slide up, wrap your full body around me and hold me as I'm shaking, almost unable to even feel my legs, staring at the ceiling, trying to breathe, trying to think, trying to remember where I am, and so happy that you are here with me, finally, in my arms, where I will never let you go.
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    Quote Originally Posted by The Other Owner View Post

    First, don't use the words for vagina he already uses. One of the purposes of erotica is to create an erotic, unfamiliar, exciting reality. You do that by creating a scene or story that hits his triggers, but does it by creating a world that is dirtier, nastier, hotter than he's used to. You want to use the words he's too timid to use, or thinks you might find objective or offensive. But since you are using them, that makes it doubly hot to him. So your dirtier/hotter choices are better: twat, pussy, cunt, fuckhole, etc. But in the body of the story, you don't actually use the words a lot -- you may use one or two to set a paragraph, then use suggestion, positioning or a softer word when you are in the action:
    These are very good thoughts but I think it's important not to think too hard when writing "erotica" or stories or whatever you want to call writing about fucking. In a way it should just sort of flow. I think you can always tell when people put waaaaay too much thought into these stories.

    I guess for me...my husband and I tend to still have pretty raunchy and dirty sex. I love talking dirty so it isn't that weird or awkward for me when I write to use a lot of really filthy language and what not.

    When I write things for him I like to pretend that we are two totally different people then in real life. Like I'm a whore he has picked up and he is really married to someone else. However... I always throw in one or two things that only he and I know so it makes it personalized... like words only he uses for me.

    At any rate...I'm sure he will REALLY enjoy whatever you write !!
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    Default Re: ok. two things:

    ^ What you are describing is more role-playing, situational erotica, or "Penthouse Letters" erotica. It is so much easier to do that yourself because, as you note, you two have learned exactly which roles work for you.

    Role-playing erotica can also be extremely hot, and in many ways it's much easier to write because it relies more on traditional story-telling, fantasies, taboos, triggers, etc. than does "technique erotica," which is purely about the intensity of the act. Technique erotica requires that you know how the couple physically acts, reacts, feels, responds, and how they experience each other, so in that case it's much harder to write.

    Most people fantasize using role-playing erotica, which is what Penthouse figured out a long time ago.

    Here's an example of the first paragraph of role-playing erotica I wrote last night for a specific member for a different section of the forum:

    I'm like that dark, brooding, intense teacher in high school who knows you are brilliant, but never says a single word to you about it. He catches you staring at him when you should be reading. You spend all your time working hard to please him, because he's so fucking smart, and he's got these amazing shoulders and wide, strong, powerful hands. You work long hours, writing over and over until you are sure it will be perfect. And, of course, you secretly fantasize about him all the time, about how after school is out and the building is empty and quiet, he binds your hands and your feet firmly to your chair with soft white silk rope. He's careful not to hurt you, but you find, surprisingly, that you can't move at all. You are wearing your shortest, flimsiest skirt, the one you hope he will always notice, and a loose white blouse and the breeze from the open window blows your hair up into his face as he kneels down right in front of you, smiles at you and looks deeply into your eyes. And those eyes of his, those amazing eyes, just penetrate your soul, and then you feel the scent from his hair, then his shirt. You start shaking a bit, even though it's warm, too warm, inside the room, and you begin to breathe a little faster.

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    Default Re: ok. two things:

    TOO- WOW!!!!! yeah my story is so bleh compared to that. i really really suck at this...

    thank you for the suggestions! keep them coming! i've used pussy, cunt, twat, and er...*goes to reread* ok i guess thats it.

    i liked fuck hole, though. haha...

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    Nani
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    Default Re: ok. two things:

    Check out literotica.com

    Unless I am missing a post ( I skimmed fast ) , no one mentioned this site and well ..... it's my favorite.

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Other Owner View Post
    It's not the words you choose that count. It's the impact of the words on him. The story is designed to unfold in his mind and world.

    I'm going to disagree with a few things said in the thread.

    I am assuming you are writing erotica, rather than a personal romantic story. The rules for the latter are different.

    OK, for erotica:

    First, don't use the words for vagina he already uses. One of the purposes of erotica is to create an erotic, unfamiliar, exciting reality. You do that by creating a scene or story that hits his triggers, but does it by creating a world that is dirtier, nastier, hotter than he's used to. You want to use the words he's too timid to use, or thinks you might find objective or offensive. But since you are using them, that makes it doubly hot to him.

    So your dirtier/hotter choices are better: twat, pussy, cunt, fuckhole, etc. But in the body of the story, you don't actually use the words a lot -- you may use one or two to set a paragraph, then use suggestion, positioning or a softer word when you are in the action:

    Let's say you are describing how you like it when he goes down on you.

    "When I feel the force of your full body on top of mine, faces so close we kiss, or nuzzle, or I softly sense the scent of sweat, or hair or skin from your body, I relax and smile, so happy to have you with me, me holding you in my arms. But I quickly stiffen when I feel you slowly slide down my body, arms caressing my sides, your face kissing my tits, licking my nipples, your right hand swiftly sliding between my legs and pressing firmly against my wet pussy, while your face remains over my chest, your tongue exploring my nipples softly at first, and then harder, then lightly biting them. You press the palm of your hand between my legs hard against my mound and hold it there, and I raise my back to push against you, and then your fingers start to play with me, tease me, flicking back and forth over my lips, one finger, then two, just barely sliding in. You bring your face over my belly and kiss it so gently, then begin to lick down my stomach, slowly, moving down to where your hand is now caressing me. Your tongue slides easily over my clit, where you stop and press your full tongue against it so I can feel it, and I moan with pleasure as your soft, wet tongue slides over my clit, making it disappear completely.

    You bring your tongue up firmly against my clit and suddenly push my entire body up hard on the bed, so quickly I almost hit my head, and I spread my arms out just so I don't fall off the bed. I look down and you are kneeling, holding me up with one arm around the waist, the other hand playing with my twat, your tongue flicking furiously over my clit, as I collapse, moaning and running my hands over your broad shoulders, then down to your arms where I caress them as you are licking me. I lift my head off the pillow to watch you licking me, long strokes, over and over, and I can barely hold my head up any more and then suddenly you slide two fingers into my dripping snatch, arched up, pulling me even closer. I groan and whisper, "finger-fuck my cunt, hard," and instantly you start thrusting both fingers in and out, finger-fucking me with such force I can't move and now finally my head just collapses on the pillow, my mouth wide open with nothing coming out at all but my rapid breathing. "Fucking harder," I say, gasping for breath as I feel your fingers ramming into me, banging up against my softest spots, with your mouth pressing down from above, tongue licking my clit long and hard and persistently and deliberately and constantly, over and over, for what seems like forever, and I hear the pounding of your fingers and feel them deep inside me and slapping against me, and then I feel it build, just slightly, so I push my pussy harder against you and close my eyes and then suddenly it rises so quickly, so fucking fast I wasn't prepared for it, and I grab your hair with both hands but then it plateaus, with my mouth frozen open, and so you pick up speed, your fingers a fucking blur of thrusting, and I break through the plateau and peak so fucking hard I bang away three more times, so fast and intense and explosive that this endless fucking scream erupts from my throat, my body shaking, and I grab your hair and push you away, "No, no, stop, it's too much," because I'm overwhelmed by these rolling orgasms that have control of my body and I've become so sensitive that I need some space. So you slide up, wrap your full body around me and hold me as I'm shaking, almost unable to even feel my legs, staring at the ceiling, trying to breathe, trying to think, trying to remember where I am, and so happy that you are here with me, finally, in my arms, where I will never let you go.

    Ummm I think I'm in love.

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    Default Re: ok. two things:

    I was going to mention literotica but i was beat to the punch!

    And blayze, you're a pretty creative mofo when you want to be, I'm sure it will be amazing! Plus if it's written specifically for your hubby he will like it even more!






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    Default Re: ok. two things:

    Yeah, approaches differ. If I were to write something like that (I only have once, by request), it would be allusory rather than graphic, evocative rather than descriptive, understated rather than overstated. But I'm also the kind of guy who prefers a covered nude shot to a spread leg photo. To each their own.

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