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    Loving her is like walking into an ocean
    you want to drown in its beauty
    even if it kills you


    I sit back and watch her run around
    unaware of her actions, unaware of the damage she unleashes
    each of her seductions is another bullet in my brain
    her body, the ultimate weapon
    uses it to massacre daily
    I love this murderous creature


    She beckons me to her come to her
    a coy smile armed with dark eyes
    full of intentions, sinister intentions
    I walk toward her
    she's all that exists
    the club fades away, the giggling whores,
    the lustful men become irrelavent pieces in the background
    the lights stream down her body
    in all her nake glory
    and it begins


    I taste her in the air
    she teasingly glides in front of me
    tosses her silky tresses
    struts and sways in the art she knows best
    she enraptures me with her womanly body
    my eyes ravish her with all I want to do to her
    my darling, my bronze goddess
    if only I had the chance, the things I would do to you


    to supress every breath out of her little lungs
    bind her body with such pain and savegery
    pleasure in her cries, and pleadings of mercy
    torture her for bringing me to crave her so
    leaving me unable to be sated with another
    such fantasies so unjust and unhumane
    especially a man of my stature
    I can't help it this is what she does to me


    she crawls toward me
    arching her body
    masking her face with the illusion of desire
    radiating raw sexual power at its finest
    yes she sees me, only me
    she comes closer
    I'm frozen anticipitaing her next move
    she brushes up against me
    my body reacts to the soft warmth
    she let me touch her
    she chose me, only me
    she's mine


    she watches my reaction
    eyes piercing me like a silencing blade
    I curse as I need to adjust myself
    she grins at her power
    her work is done i'm caught in her spell
    fucking bitch
    I walk away in disgust
    leaving the fools begging to be next


    gulping down a glass of smirnoff
    I take comfort in this substance's embrace
    letting it run through my body
    numbing my senses, leaving my eyes glazed
    thoughts in false lush merriment
    now unaware of the hellish paradise before me
    the underworld in which souls are sold in the name of lust
    unaware that my beloved is one of its creatures
    she is one of its many demonesses
    this is all in the days work


    dawn comes it's finally over
    for tonight anyhow
    the facadest are no more
    the glamour is packed away
    she lays with me bare, vulnerable unguarded
    weeps of her tormenting existence
    I hold her, coddle her to sleep
    as her mind dissapears into the realm of dreams
    she takes my sanity along with her
    "I had to wonder if men were so blinded by beauty that they would feel privledged
    to live their lives with an actual demon, so as long it was a beautiful demon."
    -Memoirs Of A Geisha


    "Stripping is like a bad boyfriend, you know you should walk away, but always go back for more."

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    Default Re: Stripper Poem/Story

    As you can tell this is from her lover's point of view...so what do you guys think be honest...I can take critiques...
    Last edited by Delilah27; 02-12-2008 at 05:42 PM. Reason: misspelled word
    "I had to wonder if men were so blinded by beauty that they would feel privledged
    to live their lives with an actual demon, so as long it was a beautiful demon."
    -Memoirs Of A Geisha


    "Stripping is like a bad boyfriend, you know you should walk away, but always go back for more."

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    Star_bare_elegance
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    I Love It !!! ;d

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    I second that. I totally dig it.

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    i love love love that!

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