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    Default Wanna read my poetry ? I have PMS today so be nice , please?!!?

    Ok so I want to start off this thread with a quote .

    ~Keep in mind that I am artisit and I am sensative about my shit .
    ~Erykah Badu


    Ok with that in mind here are two of my most recent poems . The first one is my Fav


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    My hearts been broken , that’s no lie .
    My heart has strings you need to untie .
    With this broken heart I can never be whole , its been torn apart but I still have my soul .
    At times things will be tart , Bitter sweet .
    However I will not let the past defeat .




    This one is still sorta a rough draft ....




    Brought together by a dream
    Held apart by the past
    My heart bursts at its seam
    For this love it appears wont last

    I am ready for this fight
    If this ends there will be regrets
    I can open this heart that’s been closed so tight
    Trust in that feeling , hold me in your arms and forget


    Ok so thanks for reading oxxo
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    Anyone ???
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    Default Re: Wanna read my poetry ? I have PMS today so be nice , please?!!?

    I like the second a lot. Im sorry about the PMS!

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    Default Re: Wanna read my poetry ? I have PMS today so be nice , please?!!?

    I'm curious as to what kind of state you were in when you wrote that.

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    ^^^LOL. Awkward silence.
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    Default Re: Wanna read my poetry ? I have PMS today so be nice , please?!!?

    Quote Originally Posted by LiveFree View Post
    I'm curious as to what kind of state you were in when you wrote that.

    Actually when i wrote the first one I was in a really great mood and things were well in the love area . The second one I just kinda sat down and "forced" out ......I say forced because the first one was just coming out of me and I had to sit down and put it on paper .....anyways , thanks for reading !!
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