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    Quote Originally Posted by Cyril View Post
    What I am saying is that your opinion means very little to me unless you earn the credibility. This is a poor quality argument coming from someone who wants to be a lawyer.
    LoL, you know, I might take your insults more seriously if you didn't come off as someone so uneducated that you can't even speak basic english, let alone understand sentence structure, or how to even formulate a basic thought. Comment on my choice of schooling when you're worthy. Until then stop speaking. Every word out of your mouth only makes you out to be even more of a joke then you already are.

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    Anyone can say baseless things like these. This entire post had no merit whatsoever.
    Mods since this post had no merit according to the OP himself, can we lock it now please?
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    ^You've done nothing but bait him since your first post in this thread. I really can't see what you are getting out of it. You have the whole rest of the internet. Ever heard of live and let live?
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    ^^^ Hopper please feel free to link the post where you've given any feedback, positive or otherwise, related to the Cyril's novel.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cyril View Post
    I noticed, I make less grammatical mistakes when I write a chapter on the weekend. So, to avoid heartache and pain on grammar loving peanut gallery, I will abstain from writing the seventh chapter till the weekend arrives. However, there will be no guarantee that the chapter will be devoid of grammatical mistakes. I will certainly try though.
    Grammar is not the only thing I point out.

    What about the poor writing? Are you going to spend any time fixing the first several chapters before piling on to this car wreck?
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    Quote Originally Posted by JayATee View Post
    LoL, you know, I might take your insults more seriously if you didn't come off as someone so uneducated that you can't even speak basic english, let alone understand sentence structure, or how to even formulate a basic thought. Comment on my choice of schooling when you're worthy. Until then stop speaking. Every word out of your mouth only makes you out to be even more of a joke then you already are.



    Mods since this post had no merit according to the OP himself, can we lock it now please?
    The point is, who cares what you have to say. I will repeat one more time, you have to earn the credibility before I will care about your opinion.

    I am beginning to have doubts about you going to a law school. I think you are just playing the head game. It is a vampire thing to play the head game as pointed out by you earlier in a different thread.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hopper View Post
    ^ Ever heard of live and let live?
    If people learned to live and let live then there would be no war and conflict in this world.

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    Quote Originally Posted by verfolgung View Post
    Grammar is not the only thing I point out.

    What about the poor writing? Are you going to spend any time fixing the first several chapters before piling on to this car wreck?
    My writing is excellent. Now, are you going to do the proof reading or not? If you want we can send to a publisher and try to get you paid some mullah for the editing work. You are a good proof reader. I am impressed with your proof reading skills.

    However, keep in mind, you are not a thinker like I am.

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    Quote Originally Posted by verfolgung View Post
    ^^^ Hopper please feel free to link the post where you've given any feedback, positive or otherwise, related to the Cyril's novel.
    I don't have time to read novels. I also don't have time to read through bitchy comments to get to the relevant ones by people who have.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hopper View Post
    I don't have time to read novels. I also don't have time to read through bitchy comments to get to the relevant ones by people who have.
    Then ignore me. I've extended you the courtesy, and no one has asked you to comment on my comments. Now be quiet. No one really cares what you have to say anyway. There are no relevant comments here. The OP said so himself.

    Besides that Hopper, all you do is post baiting, argumentative posts yourself, so Im disinclined to see your argument as valid anyway. Have a nice day.
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    Quote Originally Posted by JayATee View Post
    Then ignore me. I've extended you the courtesy, and no one has asked you to comment on my comments anyway. Now be quiet. No one really cares what you have to say anyway. There are no relevant comments here. The OP said so himself.
    The OP was talking about the entire post (of Verf) not the entire thread. There is a difference between "entire post" and "entire thread". You have to learn to comprehend properly.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cyril View Post
    The OP was talking about the entire post (of Verf) not the entire thread. There is a difference between "entire post" and "entire thread". You have to learn to comprehend properly.
    The OP? You're speaking in 3rd person now? LoL. Take an english class.
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    Quote Originally Posted by JayATee View Post
    The OP? You're speaking in 3rd person now? LoL. Take an english class.
    That was a response to a dramatic post of yours. Therefore appropriate language (equally dramatic) was used.

    You certainly can use a class in satire.
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    Quote Originally Posted by JayATee View Post
    Then ignore me. I've extended you the courtesy, and no one has asked you to comment on my comments. Now be quiet. No one really cares what you have to say anyway. There are no relevant comments here. The OP said so himself.

    Besides that Hopper, all you do is post baiting, argumentative posts yourself, so Im disinclined to see your argument as valid anyway. Have a nice day.
    The difference is I do it sensibly. Your own inane posts just cause me to have to scroll further and go through more pages to read the others. This happens whether or not we ignore each other. Irrelevant doesn't have to mean stupid or boring.

    "I'm disinclined to see your argument as valid"? Maybe you really do study law.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hopper View Post
    ^You've done nothing but bait him since your first post in this thread. I really can't see what you are getting out of it.
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    I don't have time to read novels. I also don't have time to read through bitchy comments to get to the relevant ones by people who have.
    ...seems you do have time.

    Cyril, in your opinion, are there any strippers here enjoying the content of your novel?
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    ^I just read one in ten. Don't add to my workload.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cyril View Post
    My writing is excellent. Now, are you going to do the proof reading or not? If you want we can send to a publisher and try to get you paid some mullah for the editing work. You are a good proof reader. I am impressed with your proof reading skills.

    However, keep in mind, you are not a thinker like I am.
    Your writing is excellent? Not one person on here has thought so. You can't even garner positive feedback from your buddy Hopper, who apparently has no time to read your drivel. Rather than continuing to delude yourself you should go buy a book on writing, or take a creative writing course. Start with short stories to practice and hone you skills. Until then your just wasting people's time, especially yours. Worse, all you're doing to making yourself look more and more like a fool. Wouldn't your rather gain some honest respect than continued to be ridiculed?

    Yes, you are correct. I am not a thinker "like" you, because I actually put some thought into things.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hopper View Post
    I don't have time to read novels. I also don't have time to read through bitchy comments to get to the relevant ones by people who have.
    Whatever dude. The first several chapters are all in the very first post. You don't have to go looking for them, or even have to read the whole thing provide an opinion. Pity, because of anyone here, Cyril would probably value your opinion of his work more than anyone.
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    P.S. JayATee, bring back the old avatar!
    Better? LoL.
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    Quote Originally Posted by verfolgung View Post
    Your writing is excellent? Not one person on here has thought so. You can't even garner positive feedback from your buddy Hopper, who apparently has no time to read your drivel. Rather than continuing to delude yourself you should go buy a book on writing, or take a creative writing course. Start with short stories to practice and hone you skills. Until then your just wasting people's time, especially yours. Worse, all you're doing to making yourself look more and more like a fool. Wouldn't your rather gain some honest respect than continued to be ridiculed?

    Yes, you are correct. I am not a thinker "like" you, because I actually put some thought into things.
    Well, on the internet anyone can disrespect anyone (unless of course if you are a moderator). So, all you are doing is being a drama queen.

    I have never seen a thought provoking post from you and I have been here for a while now.

    However, you have a great potential as a proof reader. It is shame that you do not seize on this great opportunity.

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    Better? LoL.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shy_Guy View Post
    Not bad
    I disagree. This one is actually frightening me. I liked her first avatar though. I do not know why she had to replace that one with these scary ones.

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    ^It's not her avatar which scares me. Oops there I go baiting again. We aren't supposed to do that here are we.
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    ...its scary how much effort is being put into a novel that almost no one has read, even HOPPER.
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    I did say "novels", not "Cyril's novel". Why would I want to READ about strippers? People here who have read Cyril's book and think it's a waste of time are still wasting their time here on it. That's more of an irony than anything else.

    Nor are Cyril and I "buddies". I just sided with him to give the trolls a hard way to go. I don't even care if he is a troll himself, since the same people who troll him troll me. If he's a troll, apparently trolls can troll other trolls.
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    Quote Originally Posted by verfolgung View Post
    Whatever dude. The first several chapters are all in the very first post. You don't have to go looking for them, or even have to read the whole thing provide an opinion. Pity, because of anyone here, Cyril would probably value your opinion of his work more than anyone.
    He'd value anyone's if they commented civilly. I think you are all taking it too seriously. It simply doesn't matter if someone drafts a novel badly. It's a work in progress.
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