I really like the idea for your app. I'd like to know more about it. What does it do exactly?
Now, for your article, it seems very well researched. However, it seems a bit wordy. I would try to shorten it to about half of the length and make it more concise. I also think that you could add some antidotes, perhaps drop the celebrity names who have fans that you refer to in your article, or give other real life but applicable stories to demonstrate just how powerful a certain platform can be in reaching a growing fanbase.
You have a really awesome start but editing a written piece will really give your article some shine.
I hope that you don't take my constructive criticism harshly. If I had thought that it was bad then I wouldn't have bothered to write a response.
Keep going!

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