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    Hello all! I'm fairly new to the forums, but have spent some time clicking around, reading what people think, and I've come to enjoy the perspective shared here. Before I get to my question though, I'd like to provide some background:

    I'm fairly new to the SC scene, and after my first time with a dancer, I wrote a short story/vignette. I've had some poetry and historical articles published in magazines back in college, but since then, I haven't put my writing out there. The story is fairly tasteful (it's about my first night, so it's as tasteful as it could be), and it's about 95-98% accurate, with just a few details adjusted for effect. I reached out to Bahuba for whether or not it would be appropriate to share, and he recommended I ask you.

    So, with that, would it be alright if I shared what I wrote? I'm open to all comments/critiques, as that helps me hone my craft. Stealing from Bahuba again, if I get five yeses (from pinks!), I'll share it.

    Thanks for reading!

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    Share it online with us or with the strippers IRL? How many pages? Are you trying to charge?

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    I'd share it here. It's about 4-5 pages on word, and the only charge is your time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by PinkPopcorn View Post
    Is it erotica or perspective? If it's erotica, we charge to read your pornography. If it's not erotica...I don't see why not.
    This is an excellent response. I completely agree. When we're on Stripperweb we're off the clock. So reading a new member's erotica or sexual fantasies is out of the question. But if it's something else go for it.

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    I don't think it's erotica, certainly not intended to be. Erotic elements, perhaps, as it's a retelling of my first time going to a club, but certainly not written with the intent of deriving pleasure. Its intended more as a reflection and expression of appreciation for the woman I spent my time with.

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    I would take a glance. As long as it doesn't get you the ban hammer, why not?
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    So, it looks like I've got three responses saying (conditionally) to go for it. Anyone else have input?

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    Can you write a comedy story about a strip club? I've never seen that. It's always mysteries and crimes and drugs and Charity the new girl is missing, etc.
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    Bahuba, I'm more of an experiential writer. I write largely non-fictional, semi-autobiographical stories with minor details changed to protect the "innocent."

    I'm sure there is plenty of material out there for a comedic interpretation though. Reading a lot of the posts on here, I believe the ladies have a unique perspective looking out that would contribute to a comedy. Guys are weird creatures, and I can't imagine the crazy, funny stuff that these women see.

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    Bahuba, I like the way you think! Comedy would be awesome to see. I've lived through and/or witnessed enough bizarre, creepy, crime, and drug type strip club moments, as I'm sure plenty others here have.

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    I have been witness to several very comedic moments at SCs - one which I will never forget was when a reg was trying to slow dance with a dancer out in the main club area and she was not having it.

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    Titus - I believe there is a place in the blue section to write about experiences with dancers. Any reason in particular you prefer to post in the pink section?
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    I honestly don't know where to post it. Talked to a mod, and just following their advice. If the interest, isn't there, that's fine. I'm not trying to intrude on this place too much. It's got a good vibe, and I'd hate to interfere with that.

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    since you're being really vague i must ask, does this story at any point go into detail about you fondling a dancer or getting a boner? lol

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    Haha, definitely no details about a boner. The closest I get to going into detail about "fondling" was a back massage I gave her, although there are vague descriptions of the dances we shared (I hate saying vague, because that connotes boring, the descriptions are more abstract than specific). One dance in particular has more detail than the others, but nothing explicit. I only ever touched where my hands were placed.

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    This is a fine post for here - he is asking a question, as above mod has detailed.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bahuba View Post
    Can you write a comedy story about a strip club? I've never seen that. It's always mysteries and crimes and drugs and Charity the new girl is missing, etc.
    One time I brought a friend of mine to the club. He had been to clubs before, but, only a few times and hadn't even gotten a lap dance. A gorgeous dancer comes by to chat me up and she sweet talks me into buying dances. I say sure. She gets up and starts walking towards the lap dance room, I get up and follow right behind her, and, as I am about to enter the lap dance room, I notice that my friend is right behind me. He's been following me and the dancer. I asked him, "Um, where are you going?" He said, "I'm just following you." I said, "No, no, no, I'm about to get a lap dance and some grinding from that hot little dancer, and you,... you just need to go back to your seat."
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    ^^Hahaha! The hated two banana threesome - nobody wants those
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