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    Default My Nightmare

    I woke up 20 minutes ago from the same dream I've had all week. Sat down and wrote this real quick before I get ready for work. It has a slow melody in my head, but I think it works as stand-alone poetry. As always, please comment/critique. Thanks!



    There's a dream I'm dreaming.

    A scene I keep seeing,
    repeating
    over and over and over
    in my head.
    I just can't stop
    seeing
    the smile you smile when you're not smiling.

    Every night
    I close my eyes
    and see you.
    Every day
    I wake up
    and you're gone.
    The time between
    our meetings
    is too long.

    There's a dream I'm dreaming.
    A scene repeating,
    your face etched into my mind.
    I know when I wake up
    the dream will be over
    and I'll be left behind.
    So why would I wake up
    to this nightmare
    without you?

    There's a Dream I'm dreaming.
    A scene repeating,
    forever and ever
    and ever
    and...

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