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    The Strip
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    I dance each night on a blackened stage
    To the music for an unknown wage
    Dollar bills and sometimes fives
    Are thrown at me in seedy dives

    There's the man with the strange toupee
    His disheveled clothes in disarray
    He hoots and hollars and calls me names
    "You're nothing, a whore, a slut," he proclaims

    There's the man in the three piece suit
    Discussing his latest illegal pursuit
    He tips big money to keep me quiet
    About that gunshot and that riot

    There's the man with the octopus hands
    Who used me until I took that stand
    Now he's here for all the fresh meat
    But don't worry, he'll be 'discreet'

    There's the banker, the player, the teen
    And that guy that tipped the bean
    There's the husband, the fiancee, the newlywed
    And there's the guy that asked,"How much for head?"

    They all think I'm a woman for sale
    Like I'm little girl who's inside all frail
    But I'm strong inside from each day like this
    Because I know I can find my bliss

    There he is, with the crooked smile
    The perfect customer who makes it worthwhile
    No hands, no mouth, and always a kind word
    No sex, that's okay, he's never dettered

    But then there's everything else I own
    College degree and not a single loan
    Yes, the collagen was a splurge
    But I made the money when I had the urge

    I can see your paycheck and raise you double
    In a single night with hardly some trouble
    I can look in the mirror and see the beauty
    Even when you're saying shit and being snooty

    You may demean me and call me names
    But I'm a proud stripper all the same
    You may think I'm lower than you
    But could you really do what I can do?

    Can you get on that plastic stage
    And get naked for that unknown wage?
    Could you be called a whore and a slut
    And still come home with a very proud strut?

    For all you do and all you say
    Could not once ruin my day
    You're so lonely you have to come to me
    To bring you up when you're on your knees

    You're the one who can't get it up
    Your self-esteem, I mean, you little yup
    Don't worry, for money you can come to me
    And make all your insults just to see

    But in the end, you can't hurt who I am
    It's not my life that you really condemn
    No matter what, I'll always be chipper
    Because you're the one who needs a stripper

    ...I was bored.
    Last edited by Lysondra; 03-29-2006 at 06:07 AM.

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    Default Re: The Strip

    That's awesome. Very inspiring and the dead-on truth.
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    Smiley Re: The Strip

    Very nicely done!

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    Very well done......

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    Wow! That is good. You have great writing ability.

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    Default Re: The Strip

    Great job! I'm printing it so I can show it to the girls at work. Wow, keep writing!

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    Default Re: The Strip

    this is so going on the mirror in the dressing room tonight

    write more!

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    Great job!

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    Default Re: The Strip

    Awsome!!!!!
    MYIAH
    you may be a MILF but FROM WHAT I'm told..I'm a a Glif!

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    I love it !!!!
    You say psycho like it's a bad thing

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    Default Re: The Strip

    Excellent job

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    LOOOOved it!

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    Beautifully written!

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