




She's a lovely lady indeed. I have to say, however, that I am not feeling the 4th image. The angle really doesn't do anything for her facial features. But that's just me.![]()
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The 3rd picture is definitely the hottest!
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Neat.. a lot of women have reply that they love the 4th one.. it is neat that you don't like it.





yeah, the way the 4th picture is makes her head look big or something. but she's really cute![]()
Not really feeling that much; too young looking, perhaps.
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Pretty green eyes...it's the first thing I noticed.





Very cute. I like pic #3 & 4





Not especially hot, but another pretty girl. What is special about her?
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the second one is cute- i like the colours/tones whatever its called in that one.





she is adorable/hot in that "barely legal" way with a little bit of extra quirk.... HOWever... she is missing that fire behind her eyes. her gaze is very bland- other than when she is scrunching up her face she exudes ZERO emotion whatsoever and seems like she is expecting the camera to pick up her hotness alone... she doesn't radiate that "je ne sais quoi" that an older more experienced girl might know how to do. She needs more warmth in her face and behind her eyes- that would not only make her seem a bit older/more mature, but more appealing.
She 20 years old.. soon to be 21.
This was her first shoot ever.. She is a tom boy by naturally..
Very pretty girl. For ordinary pictures, these would be very nice.
I get the feeling that you're after higher-level glamourish shots. Are you using a softbox? I think the light is a bit harsh, could stand some softening, maybe quicker exposure on the camera, to give the shots some gentler tones and more texture.
As the others said, ditch the fourth. It's all head. There's artistic ways to present out-of-proportion interesting perspective, but this isn't it. The fifth picture could use some more tension in the shots - a tensing or flexing of the fingers or mussing up the hair a bit to add dramatic punch to the caption.
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What is the purpose of these pics?
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you can only survive by clinging onto trees
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cute is the word i would describe her as.





Totally not my type. I can see what everyone else is saying about the "cute" factor, but she looks like she should be working the cash register at Hot Topic.
Embyr did a great job of explaining how there's emptiness in her pictures. She's not having the kind of dialogue with the camera that leaves the photo with a distinct feeling. Like if you could see more of the shirt she's wearing in #3, it would make good catalogue work.
i think she is very pretty





Her skin glows a lot in the pics, she has great skin.
To be perfectly honest, she doesn't have the right bone structure to model. Her face is too round and she has that "baby fat" that some younger girls have.
To take great face shots u need someone with very defined bone structure and you will be able to do great angles with them.
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