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    Default OK, so I was bored....

    ....and I tried to make a website. I am just learning, so don't laugh too hard!
    I got a book on html so I plan to spruce it up a bit, but can you guys let me know what you think? Also, I put a bunch of pictures on the photo page, so if you don't want them there, let me know. Also, if you DO want them there, send me some pics and I'll add them!

    Thanks in advance!


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    I like it, neat page, junk isn't everywhere. Cleaner is better, you can get your information across more easily to your audience.

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    Lookin good sexy bitch!

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    You've got a lot of typos. Other than that it does look good!

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    EEEEEK! Where? I am SO anal about typos! (off to look for them)
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    EGADS! I think I got them all...If you see anymore, PLEASE TELL ME! Bad spelling is a huge pet peeve of mine!
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    Hello Everyone and thank you for checking out my webpage! First, let me introduce myself... my name is Krissy Kennedy, and I live in Sunny Florida near Tampa. I travel about twice a month, and in the mean time I wok at a club called the Brass Flamingo in Port Richey, which is an awesome club! I love traveling, and especially getting to put on awesome shows and meet all the incredibly people that come out to watch my shows!

    Other than that here is some tid-bits about me...I LOVE shopping I also study Kung Fu (Northern Prayin Mantis) and love to do tournaments. (but only when I win of course! (which is mos of the time!) I love sailing and am currently looking for a boat (the last one I had a a 28' Contest, so I'm looking for something a little bigger. I absolutely adore project boats and it's amazing how much you can fiddle around with them and learn a lot! I also make my own feature costumes, and am currently working a web site for that now. Well, that's me in a nutshell! Please feel free to leave comments in my guest book, and hopefully in my travels I'll meet you soon!
    You should also have spaces and capitalized first letters after an ellipse. (...) And "I LOVE shopping I also study Kung Fu" is a run-on sentence.

    I love your layout and design though, very nice!

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    Sheeeeeeit! I just changed all that! I must have forgot to save it.... I suck.
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    Okidokee...that's what I get when I try to type with no sleep! LOL! Thank you darling! xoxo
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    No worries, I'm a compulsive proofreader... grandmother's an English teacher, don'tcha know.

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    well, as long as we're picking apart this poor girl's grammar, you should also put your sentence-ending punctuation (like periods, etc.) after your ellipses (like this).

    Other than that...MORE PICS OF YOU!

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    Wow. This is the first time I've ever had my grammar picked on.
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    Mr. Hyde is a meanie, KK. I'm offering private copywriting lessons, by the way. <G>

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    No, this is an ellipse: ...
    These are parenthises: ()

    And yes, if they're in the middle of a sentence, the period should be outside.

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    Egads... Paigesexual!


    I like it. I'm not huge on the color scheme, but that's me.... Otherwise, it looks very clean. I shall link to you on my next update!
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    Have "My Bio" or "About Me" instead of Krissy Kennedy - Feature Entertainer as the hyperlink.

    Keep the same header on top of all the pages with Krissy Kennedy (you don't need to put anything much else on it) so we know where we are at all times.

    Have a link back to your home (index) page on all pages on your site.

    "Check out me and my sexy friends" - keep it short and sweet... just say Photo Gallery and then have "Check out my sexy friends and me" as the heading on that page.


    As you will see on my site (www.VanessaStacy.com) and most sites something similiar to "All content and images unless otherwise specified &#169; 2007 Vanessa (aka Vanessa Stacy aka GoldCoastGirl) - All Rights Reserved - [email protected]" should be at the bottom of each and every page of your site as well.

    WATERMARK YOUR IMAGES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! unless you want people to steal them and use them however they please. Put your website's web address on it.

    Change the MY CREDITS page to a LINKS page where you can link to other sites of interest to you and your visitors such as other stripper sites and so forth.

    If you have a myspace page.. have a link in your links section as well as in your main heading section to it if you use it often enough to promote yourself.

    Just a few of my tips.


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    Ugh! I told you I was new at this....I'll do my best though, and it's not finished yet.
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    Default Re: OK, so I was bored....

    You should also have spaces and capitalized first letters after an ellipse. (...)
    not technically so...you capitalize after an ellipsis (ellipse is a shape ) with ending punctuation (like a period). So four dots = capitalize. But in most proper uses of an ellipsis mid-sentence, capitalization wouldn't be required.

    (Sorry, had to).

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    ^^^ True, I stand corrected. I was talking about the places where she had an ellipsis ending a sentence, and then a new sentence with no space and no capital letter. As for the "ellipse" vs. "ellipsis" - brainfart! *smacks forehead*

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    Looks very good for your first shot out and just getting into it.

    One of the best things to remember is to follow the KISS method.
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    It looks nice! You should add more pics of yourself. You're really beautiful and of course that's what people want to see!

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    I think it looks great so far! I can't wait to see the final result!

    Keep up the good work!

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    Default Re: OK, so I was bored....

    Quote Originally Posted by Yekhefah View Post
    No, this is an ellipse: ...
    These are parenthises: ()

    And yes, if they're in the middle of a sentence, the period should be outside.
    Whoops, thanks, got my terminology mixed up for a sec there.

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